haiku (golden poplars)
haiku contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks an array of trees, golden poplars and it appears so beautifully as if Nature has made this beauty line making a French lane of security; I like DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
This speaks an array of trees, golden poplars and it appears so beautifully as if Nature has made this beauty line making a French lane of security; I like DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from Ricky1024
And as the poplars lay and sleep the leaf scatter and the news and for snow the winter and year Jet Li coats them below everybody does know that this will not be the end they will upright themselves and start over and over again good luck with this in the contest doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
And as the poplars lay and sleep the leaf scatter and the news and for snow the winter and year Jet Li coats them below everybody does know that this will not be the end they will upright themselves and start over and over again good luck with this in the contest doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Your haiku have two very good first lines which are concrete images. I like the Satori which is an observation and could easily have been your moment in time. Good luck for the competition.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
Your haiku have two very good first lines which are concrete images. I like the Satori which is an observation and could easily have been your moment in time. Good luck for the competition.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Nice to see someone, who knows what a haiku is. Thank you for the review
Comment from mermaids
Your haiku form creates a clear picture of nature. I like the line " sentinels". It adds to the strength of the poem and is a fitting last line. Your words make the golden trees come alive.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
Your haiku form creates a clear picture of nature. I like the line " sentinels". It adds to the strength of the poem and is a fitting last line. Your words make the golden trees come alive.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
The poplars in the picture definitely do look like golden sentinels.
Very descriptive in such a few words.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
The poplars in the picture definitely do look like golden sentinels.
Very descriptive in such a few words.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you
Comment from GracieAnn
This Haiku Poetry Contest entry has effective syllable count that uses descriptive wood choice and the play on the word and personification of sentinels. Powerful play. Nicely worded. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
This Haiku Poetry Contest entry has effective syllable count that uses descriptive wood choice and the play on the word and personification of sentinels. Powerful play. Nicely worded. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you
Comment from teols2016
Short but nice. You invoke a lot of imagery in such a short piece. I especially like your middle line...so many options for a reader to picture in their head. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
Short but nice. You invoke a lot of imagery in such a short piece. I especially like your middle line...so many options for a reader to picture in their head. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thanks
Comment from justjo66
My favourite time of year is the fall. Great topic with artwork that satisfies the
soul. I tried canning a few times...not too good. Much easier to buy from Country Store. :o)
Jo
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
My favourite time of year is the fall. Great topic with artwork that satisfies the
soul. I tried canning a few times...not too good. Much easier to buy from Country Store. :o)
Jo
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Thanks
Comment from Lucian Carter
I'm in the same boat with tomatoes. I wrote a poem about them too :)
Perfect word choices, simple image. The lines transition from one to another quite well. The last line has sufficient impact to end the Haiku on a high note. 3/6/3 works fine for me. Plus you even made it about seasons and nature. Really great example of playing with the form.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
I'm in the same boat with tomatoes. I wrote a poem about them too :)
Perfect word choices, simple image. The lines transition from one to another quite well. The last line has sufficient impact to end the Haiku on a high note. 3/6/3 works fine for me. Plus you even made it about seasons and nature. Really great example of playing with the form.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for this well thought out review, as there are so few of them.
Comment from Boogienights
Nice entry for the haiku contest, those pears look tasty. I like how your poem is presented, the red and yellow colors speak of fall. I wish I knew how to can foods, is it hard? Thanks for sharing, and making Me crave pears. Off to the store I go! :)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
Nice entry for the haiku contest, those pears look tasty. I like how your poem is presented, the red and yellow colors speak of fall. I wish I knew how to can foods, is it hard? Thanks for sharing, and making Me crave pears. Off to the store I go! :)
Comment Written 28-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the fun review, and yes canning is a a lot of work.