Guinea Pig Thoughts
free verse16 total reviews
Comment from Daphne Molson
This poem addresses a guinea pig in the first words and does with many paragraphs describe a guinea pig in many ways, the colors of it, the natures of its fur and natures its owner likes about it. It was pleasant to have anything about a guinea pig. It was complete and espaced with
enough different thoughts in each paragraph but all the thoughts in each paragraph relate and describe the guinea pig. Thanks. Daphne Molson.
enough paragraphs
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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This poem addresses a guinea pig in the first words and does with many paragraphs describe a guinea pig in many ways, the colors of it, the natures of its fur and natures its owner likes about it. It was pleasant to have anything about a guinea pig. It was complete and espaced with
enough different thoughts in each paragraph but all the thoughts in each paragraph relate and describe the guinea pig. Thanks. Daphne Molson.
enough paragraphs
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Day Z Chayn
Mermaids,
Well, if I was chased by a 'yeti' like Yeti you've pictured, I wouldn't go near Yeti's cage either.
Yeti, as you have her today, ought to be the spokesperson for Kellog's Frosted Flakes. She already has the energy of a tiger, as you've so eloquently describe her.
Don't call the A.S.P.C.A. on me, but I'm willing to guess that your lady guinea pig Yeti ought go after a real Yeti one day in the mountains of Tibet to make a great trophy for Yeti's 'she-shed.'
~Shane~
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Mermaids,
Well, if I was chased by a 'yeti' like Yeti you've pictured, I wouldn't go near Yeti's cage either.
Yeti, as you have her today, ought to be the spokesperson for Kellog's Frosted Flakes. She already has the energy of a tiger, as you've so eloquently describe her.
Don't call the A.S.P.C.A. on me, but I'm willing to guess that your lady guinea pig Yeti ought go after a real Yeti one day in the mountains of Tibet to make a great trophy for Yeti's 'she-shed.'
~Shane~
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Hahaha! Love your thoughts. Thanks for reading and enjoying my poem about Little Yeti. Elaine
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
I love your little guinea pig poem, my friend. They are so cute. My step son had one, I use to play with, he died, We got him another from Long Island around Christmas, drove upstate with him, it's so very cute, I don't see him anymore :( Your pictures adorable:) ~Kerry
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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I love your little guinea pig poem, my friend. They are so cute. My step son had one, I use to play with, he died, We got him another from Long Island around Christmas, drove upstate with him, it's so very cute, I don't see him anymore :( Your pictures adorable:) ~Kerry
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Yes, guinea pigs are cute and fun to watch. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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Your very welcome.
Comment from DonandVicki
My daughters have had several of these critters and yes they do actually seem to be thinking when you look at them. They may be plotting to kill you or "Wheres the chow, pal" Don
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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My daughters have had several of these critters and yes they do actually seem to be thinking when you look at them. They may be plotting to kill you or "Wheres the chow, pal" Don
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Yes, guinea pigs are quite the characters. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks even a guinea pig causes and brings joy to humans, it's instinct perchance has the only key, so playful, chasing, haunting, emotional even decisive, a bit moral; I liked.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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This speaks even a guinea pig causes and brings joy to humans, it's instinct perchance has the only key, so playful, chasing, haunting, emotional even decisive, a bit moral; I liked.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from kiwigirl2821
hello Mermaids. A cat chasing guinea pig named Trixie. Well why not. How cute that they have become the beloved pets. I loved that. Hope you are well. Loved this fun poem. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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hello Mermaids. A cat chasing guinea pig named Trixie. Well why not. How cute that they have become the beloved pets. I loved that. Hope you are well. Loved this fun poem. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Cindy Warren
He's cute. It's funny he chased the cat. My daughter had an orange one named Pumpkin when she was young. He was a little nervous around the cats, otherwise he was pretty tame. He liked to eat from her hands.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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He's cute. It's funny he chased the cat. My daughter had an orange one named Pumpkin when she was young. He was a little nervous around the cats, otherwise he was pretty tame. He liked to eat from her hands.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Lucian Carter
I had a guinea pig once. Loving little creatures when they want to be.
You've got a good non-fiction poem here. No two-dollar words, no great pontifications on the meaning of life. Just a lovely tribute to something that brings you join. Good on you!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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I had a guinea pig once. Loving little creatures when they want to be.
You've got a good non-fiction poem here. No two-dollar words, no great pontifications on the meaning of life. Just a lovely tribute to something that brings you join. Good on you!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Sallyo
Gotta love those piggies. They meep away and they're always fun to watch. I loved this unpretentious little poem. It fits the subject and obviously comes from warm observation of the subjects.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Gotta love those piggies. They meep away and they're always fun to watch. I loved this unpretentious little poem. It fits the subject and obviously comes from warm observation of the subjects.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Curly Girly
Shame! Your poor cat was chased by a yeti that was dressed as a cat-eating guinea pig. That must have been a cat's worst nightmare.
A fun poem to read that was based on a true pet story.
Run, Buddy! Run!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Shame! Your poor cat was chased by a yeti that was dressed as a cat-eating guinea pig. That must have been a cat's worst nightmare.
A fun poem to read that was based on a true pet story.
Run, Buddy! Run!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Hahahaha! Yes, a cat eating guinea pig! Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
