Deep in Thought
A Rondelet for the contest82 total reviews
Comment from bluedragon776
You're so right we don't take the time to truly appreciate the awesome things that life have given us. Part of the reason we are so morally and emotionally bankrupt as a society is the total lack of gratitude. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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You're so right we don't take the time to truly appreciate the awesome things that life have given us. Part of the reason we are so morally and emotionally bankrupt as a society is the total lack of gratitude. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Very many thanks, bluedragon, for your kind review and comments. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Thinking can be a good and bad thing. Nothing thinking is a very bad thing but over thinking is just as bad. I think we can all get lost of thought and I think we can all relate to this. Great job
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Thinking can be a good and bad thing. Nothing thinking is a very bad thing but over thinking is just as bad. I think we can all get lost of thought and I think we can all relate to this. Great job
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Very many thanks for your review and supportive comments, ExperiencingLiphe. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from EverInParadise
A simply lovely Ron de let supported by an adorable picture. The mind of a child learning, learning, learning. The rhythm and rhyme of this piece is well balanced and move the reader forward so that the repeated first and last line are precise and perfect. Good luck. Glad I stopped by the poetry reviews and didn't miss this one.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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A simply lovely Ron de let supported by an adorable picture. The mind of a child learning, learning, learning. The rhythm and rhyme of this piece is well balanced and move the reader forward so that the repeated first and last line are precise and perfect. Good luck. Glad I stopped by the poetry reviews and didn't miss this one.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Very many thanks for your review and supportive comments, EverinParadise. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from honeytree
The art work is really
great for these words written
When were young and in much thought
How wonderful when we start to learn
about life and what is ahead for us.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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The art work is really
great for these words written
When were young and in much thought
How wonderful when we start to learn
about life and what is ahead for us.
Honey tree
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Very many thanks for your review and supportive comments, Honeytree. I am honoured by your award of six stars. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Such a beautiful Rondelet! Absolutely spot on rhyme and pacing combined with a message that is important to everybody. Nice word choices I found this flowed very smoothly and I enjoyed in very much kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Such a beautiful Rondelet! Absolutely spot on rhyme and pacing combined with a message that is important to everybody. Nice word choices I found this flowed very smoothly and I enjoyed in very much kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Very many thanks for your review and supportive comments, Meia. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from Hitcher
Nice! And it is nice to catch them when they are deep in thought an processing what it is they have seen and heard. We never loose that habit, though the mystique fades a bitš???excellent use of the form, good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Nice! And it is nice to catch them when they are deep in thought an processing what it is they have seen and heard. We never loose that habit, though the mystique fades a bitš???excellent use of the form, good luck!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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You're right - we tend to get a bit blase about the mystique when we grow up. It's good to be reminded of it from time to time. I appreciate the good luck wishes. All the best, Tony
Comment from Joan E.
You captured the wonderment of a child about the world and the power of words. I enjoyed your use of the Rondelet for this theme along with its rhymes and repeats. Well done and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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You captured the wonderment of a child about the world and the power of words. I enjoyed your use of the Rondelet for this theme along with its rhymes and repeats. Well done and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Joan. I very much appreciate your review and generous comments. Kind regards, Tony
Comment from pbomar1115
When I am unable to speak, it's time to shut up. In that time, I learn from the accumulated opinions, feeling, and judgments that have been deposited in my brain. I am then a smarter person. I would like to think. I can relate to your poem. Great writing.
Phillip
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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When I am unable to speak, it's time to shut up. In that time, I learn from the accumulated opinions, feeling, and judgments that have been deposited in my brain. I am then a smarter person. I would like to think. I can relate to your poem. Great writing.
Phillip
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Philip. I very much appreciate your review. Yes, a moment or two of reflection before opening one's mouth is not a bad idea sometimes! Kind regards, Tony
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You're welcome, Tony.
Phillip
Comment from c_lucas
Be careful what you say in front of a small child. They will repeat it at an embarrassing moment. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Be careful what you say in front of a small child. They will repeat it at an embarrassing moment. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Charlie. I very much appreciate your review and generous comments. Kind regards, Tony
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You're welcome, Tony. Charlie.
Comment from nancyjam
This is a sweet Rondelet - I always wonder what they could be
thinking. Our grandson is only 8 months and sometimes looks so serious.
Your grand daughter is beautiful and I'm sure she will tell you her thought
someday soon.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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This is a sweet Rondelet - I always wonder what they could be
thinking. Our grandson is only 8 months and sometimes looks so serious.
Your grand daughter is beautiful and I'm sure she will tell you her thought
someday soon.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Thanks again, Nancy. It's interesting to watch these youngsters as they begin to come to terms with the world around them. All the best, Tony
