Fearsome
Nature's fury rages!4 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
I grew up in South Florida. No hurricanes for many, many decades. Then, Hurricane Andrew happened. Hurricane Season is now much dreaded for it's destruction. This year has been the worst of all the seasons. Let us pray nature simmers into a regular routine again.
Good visual imagery created. Scary satori, because it's so true. Great work.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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I grew up in South Florida. No hurricanes for many, many decades. Then, Hurricane Andrew happened. Hurricane Season is now much dreaded for it's destruction. This year has been the worst of all the seasons. Let us pray nature simmers into a regular routine again.
Good visual imagery created. Scary satori, because it's so true. Great work.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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I actually found myself riding Irma out inside a manufactured home in Lake County, Florida while visiting an old acquaintance of mine. That is one thing I will never do again.
Here in Nashville we don't have to worry about hurricanes.
Glad you enjoyed this little bit of effort at penning poetry.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a well composed 5-7-5 focusing on the recent hurricanes experienced in the south. Once a storm like this gets going there is massive destruction. A fine entry for the contest and I wish you much luck in it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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This is a well composed 5-7-5 focusing on the recent hurricanes experienced in the south. Once a storm like this gets going there is massive destruction. A fine entry for the contest and I wish you much luck in it. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this poem.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Comment from JanPerry
"blow hard strike without warning": needs to be split or put in a comma for correctness - otherwise it suits the picture. Fearsome, perhaps could be better as hurricanes sure bring up a lot of pictures in our minds.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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"blow hard strike without warning": needs to be split or put in a comma for correctness - otherwise it suits the picture. Fearsome, perhaps could be better as hurricanes sure bring up a lot of pictures in our minds.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Appreciate you taking the time to read this 5-7-5 and to write a review.
Not sure what you meant by "Fearsome, perhaps could be better as hurricanes sure bring up a lot of pictures in our mind"?
Believe you left a word out somewhere along the line.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem and entry for the contest
with the exact syllables at 5-7-5.
Very topical as the hurricanes continue to form
hopefully will do no further damage.
Perfect picture to match
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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This is an excellent poem and entry for the contest
with the exact syllables at 5-7-5.
Very topical as the hurricanes continue to form
hopefully will do no further damage.
Perfect picture to match
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this poem.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
