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Finale

You light up my life.

2 total reviews 
Comment from zanya
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

An interesting and indeed profound truth conveyed here within the 5-7-5 format - a truth pertaining to the perennial gift of love which we all seek in our lives

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Lucian Carter
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I just fell in love and I totally understand this poem. Your use of the format is excellent. The single comma is in the perfect place. A top notch poem. Good luck!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    Thank you for your review.