The Big Bang
100 Word Story17 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
What a brilliant story - not to everyone's taste perhaps - but I could not have put it better myself. What a great idea you had for a flash fiction. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
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What a brilliant story - not to everyone's taste perhaps - but I could not have put it better myself. What a great idea you had for a flash fiction. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
There you have it, Mav! You've successfully combined both creationism and the big bang theory all into one and done so with excellent economy of words. I gotta say I have a great respect for science so truly enjoy seeing it included.
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Ange
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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There you have it, Mav! You've successfully combined both creationism and the big bang theory all into one and done so with excellent economy of words. I gotta say I have a great respect for science so truly enjoy seeing it included.
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Ange
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Exactly. I don't get the big controversy. I love science too. I wouldn't give up my dinosaurs for ANYTHING. Hell, someone has to date me. HAAAAHAHAHA! (sometimes I crack myself up) If God is God he could do whatever. I can't see why She would perpetrate a deception. Anyway, a fun thing to write with no chance in the contest. But thanks for the stars and the well wishes, Ange. :)) Mav
Comment from tfawcus
An interesting blend of Darwinism and Creationism. Either way, Earth is created in a flash, but which one is the fiction? Views on that might differ! You've hit the century exactly, if one excludes the So-be-it at the end.
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An interesting blend of Darwinism and Creationism. Either way, Earth is created in a flash, but which one is the fiction? Views on that might differ! You've hit the century exactly, if one excludes the So-be-it at the end.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
Comment from frierajac
That's it in the proverbial nutshell. It makes people and readers wonder why
Why do we still have to ask leading questions about this story. It reminds us that profundities should be appreciated simply.
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That's it in the proverbial nutshell. It makes people and readers wonder why
Why do we still have to ask leading questions about this story. It reminds us that profundities should be appreciated simply.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is a unique flash fiction, Mikey. The story of creation told as a flash fiction is really quite a feat. I congratulate you on the succinct way of presenting it and the beautiful colours chosen. Well done and good luck for the competition, Giddy
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This is a unique flash fiction, Mikey. The story of creation told as a flash fiction is really quite a feat. I congratulate you on the succinct way of presenting it and the beautiful colours chosen. Well done and good luck for the competition, Giddy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Great awareness of the Word. In the beginning God created. God sent his son. I like your witnessing to the world. You have a big heart that Jesus put inside of
you, my penpal friend. flylikeaneagle - nancy
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Great awareness of the Word. In the beginning God created. God sent his son. I like your witnessing to the world. You have a big heart that Jesus put inside of
you, my penpal friend. flylikeaneagle - nancy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Lovely visual contained in 100 words.
Each particle was sent on a journey with its own purpose -> I love that description, as well as the importance of each particle/journey
The final paragraph, the on of God appeared, offering redemption...I envisioned this at the time of death...
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Lovely visual contained in 100 words.
Each particle was sent on a journey with its own purpose -> I love that description, as well as the importance of each particle/journey
The final paragraph, the on of God appeared, offering redemption...I envisioned this at the time of death...
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
Comment from sandy montgomery
Amen indeed. I love the way you wrote this. The expansive words suited the message. Interesting and , theology aside compelling. Very pleasant to read. Thank you for sharing your work.
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Amen indeed. I love the way you wrote this. The expansive words suited the message. Interesting and , theology aside compelling. Very pleasant to read. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Clever topic for the contest. You said it all in 100 words, shorter than any other book, including the Bible. Simply stated and easy to understand. :)
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Clever topic for the contest. You said it all in 100 words, shorter than any other book, including the Bible. Simply stated and easy to understand. :)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
Well, Michael, this will either make EVERYONE happy or everyone mad. Hehehe.
It sounds good to me. I have no problem with science and my religion getting along. Love it! NG
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Well, Michael, this will either make EVERYONE happy or everyone mad. Hehehe.
It sounds good to me. I have no problem with science and my religion getting along. Love it! NG
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
