McJeeber's Revenge
Old Farmer McJeeber gets his revenge!29 total reviews
Comment from joeruptak
A poem like this is really something to crow about
I enjoyed it so much I read it again a time or two
for all his enjoyment. I really do. Thank you
six stars is not enough I would give all I have to you
but this is something the rules won't let me do
I don't know what more I can say
except thank you very much for making this old man's day
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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A poem like this is really something to crow about
I enjoyed it so much I read it again a time or two
for all his enjoyment. I really do. Thank you
six stars is not enough I would give all I have to you
but this is something the rules won't let me do
I don't know what more I can say
except thank you very much for making this old man's day
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Hi, Joe! Thank you so very much for this wonderful review! I am so happy that you enjoyed it (and more than once)! LOL! I had an absolutely grand time in writing this one and was extremely pleased when I was working on the ending and it seemed to come out just right! Thank you again for this most grand review of "McJeeber's Revenge!" Have a glorious day!
Comment from luther maddox
this is a well crafted poem with great use of imagery and personification. It is a well thought poem of fantasy, because it has touches and sprinkles of memories of childhood days.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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this is a well crafted poem with great use of imagery and personification. It is a well thought poem of fantasy, because it has touches and sprinkles of memories of childhood days.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Hi, Luther! Thank you so much for the 5 star review of my "McJeeber's Revenge!" It is greatly appreciated and I'm so happy that you enjoyed! Have a wonderful day!
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from the heart
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
This was so enjoyable, I bet it was fun to write, love the flow and the rhyming patterns within, but so a thoroughly entertaining story.........
Mitchell
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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This was so enjoyable, I bet it was fun to write, love the flow and the rhyming patterns within, but so a thoroughly entertaining story.........
Mitchell
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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You are so right! It was so much fun to write - the story just seemed to flow on its own - and when I got to the end, I think I surprised myself with the irony! LOL! Thank you so very much for the 5 star review - I am so happy that you enjoyed! Have a wonderful day!
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Mimi;
Bravo! This well written poem certainly tells an entertaining story, but more importantly, it truly has a rhyming pattern and a great deal of imagery, too. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Hi Mimi;
Bravo! This well written poem certainly tells an entertaining story, but more importantly, it truly has a rhyming pattern and a great deal of imagery, too. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very much for a super review and appreciate greatly your wonderful comments about my rhyming and imagery! It was such a fun piece to write and I am so thrilled that you really enjoyed! Have a beautiful day!
Comment from GWinterwin
Truly enjoyed your poem about McJebber's Revenge. Great word flow and rhyming as you tell the tale of how scarecrows were the ultimate answer for the crows.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Truly enjoyed your poem about McJebber's Revenge. Great word flow and rhyming as you tell the tale of how scarecrows were the ultimate answer for the crows.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for the 5 star review! I loved writing this and am so happy that you enjoyed! Thank you again and have a grand weekend!
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your story in a poem "McJeeber's Revenge". You rhymed it well and told your story. I love a bit of humor.
All then best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed reading your story in a poem "McJeeber's Revenge". You rhymed it well and told your story. I love a bit of humor.
All then best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much for your review - it's a piece that I had a great time in creating! Enjoy your weekend!
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a really charming and fun poem - a winning write for sure - fun for children to hear and the adults who read it to them - a winning combination, whether or not the prize is won in the contest - fully compliant, and a marvellous entry...
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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In my opinion, a really charming and fun poem - a winning write for sure - fun for children to hear and the adults who read it to them - a winning combination, whether or not the prize is won in the contest - fully compliant, and a marvellous entry...
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comments! It was so much fun to write and has been great to see that, through FanStory, you have enjoyed it, too :) Thanks again and have a beautiful weekend!
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You are very welcome indeed, Mimi, and a wonderful weekend to you as well...Eve
Comment from jenintorre
Excellent humor poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. It told a very good story
In excellent rhyme with good rhythm. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Excellent humor poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. It told a very good story
In excellent rhyme with good rhythm. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and the 5 stars! A fun piece to write, I am so happy that you enjoyed! Have a super weekend!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Mimi, this is a really well written poem. It tells a good story and I like the way you write it. It is in an easy, steady rhythm with good mixed rhyme and free rhyme. I enjoyed the read, thanks for posting and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Hi Mimi, this is a really well written poem. It tells a good story and I like the way you write it. It is in an easy, steady rhythm with good mixed rhyme and free rhyme. I enjoyed the read, thanks for posting and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback! This was such a fun piece to write and I'm so happy that you've enjoyed it!
Comment from Cybertron1986
I enjoyed the fusion of lore and rhyme in this piece. Not easy to accomplish, but it worked and it reminds me of old children tales. I stumbled a bit at the end, but overall it was an enjoyable treat!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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I enjoyed the fusion of lore and rhyme in this piece. Not easy to accomplish, but it worked and it reminds me of old children tales. I stumbled a bit at the end, but overall it was an enjoyable treat!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for the 5 star review! A very fun one to write, I am so glad that you enjoyed! Thanks again and have a wonderful day!
