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Bonhoeffer's Revenge

protest poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from luther maddox
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this is a bitter poem but has a flavor of the need to survive, not sure of the smile of Hitler, only you can understand the undertones of its poetic madness. The style is aggressive and you do get your point across of your heritage.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

Comment from frierajac
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Your poem has interesting Biblical allusions. I find that the ideas presented although protesting are not clear as to what or if there is a villain then who or is it just a protest generally against the scheme of things.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2017