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How do you find a missing person among thousands.
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Comment from
apky
Although the story was just about daunting in its sheer length, it still attraced me enough to read through. The sort of combination script/straight prose came across well - I'm a prose person, but great work defies borders.
I'm sure to come back for another chapter, if only to find out how Jay will go about getting back after when he no longer has the car.
Excellent work.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
Thank you.
Yes it is a bit long. That was done just to introduce a few new elements into the story.
Thanks.
Comment from
Lady t darealest
This caught my interest. Defintely want to read more. Like how jay going to get back after he ditch the car? And why was officer Perez killed? Will the door to door investigation turn up something? Are the Guerrero's Aztec trying to partner with the Picts Motorcycle Club because of the beef with the Cranoes Mc's, and what happen to the prospect, did he pull a move on the club with the girls?
Comment Written 12-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2017
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated.
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