Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 10042 "Night Sky"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
9 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written my friend and has a peaceful calm feeling going through the poem I enjoyed sorry I am so far behind regards Jill
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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This is very well written my friend and has a peaceful calm feeling going through the poem I enjoyed sorry I am so far behind regards Jill
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Hi, there is a saying, 'the hurried I go, the behinder I get,' I think it's our minds that drive that, so relax -- I thank you for your reviews you are a loyal reviewer
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your image is beautiful. Your words describe the moment well. Good job on the style of haiku. I see everything as should be. Thanks for sharing an awesome poem. Jan
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Your image is beautiful. Your words describe the moment well. Good job on the style of haiku. I see everything as should be. Thanks for sharing an awesome poem. Jan
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Jan, thank you so much for a very complimentary review. It's always a pleasure when the reader enjoys my penning,
Hugs Trisha
Comment from AnnieDawn
Great words and a favorite scene to highlight your poem. I love to write about the sea and always enjoy others point of view and opinions of the oceans constant changing view. I feel sometimes that I am being absorbed into the words and pictures, they affect me so much. Great animation.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Great words and a favorite scene to highlight your poem. I love to write about the sea and always enjoy others point of view and opinions of the oceans constant changing view. I feel sometimes that I am being absorbed into the words and pictures, they affect me so much. Great animation.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I was thrilled to find an animated picture! I'm really glad you liked the Haiku.thank for a great review.
Comment from nbonner
Nature is such a beautiful creature and it comes in all shapes and colors. I like you wrote about a piece of the ocean, I love it on the beach, so calming. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Nature is such a beautiful creature and it comes in all shapes and colors. I like you wrote about a piece of the ocean, I love it on the beach, so calming. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I'm only too happy to share visions of nature. Thank for reviewing so kindly
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We may see something like this and be convinced that our faith is true. Faith is often based on no proof that it exists and those who are cynical are usually non-believers. Food for thought in your poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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We may see something like this and be convinced that our faith is true. Faith is often based on no proof that it exists and those who are cynical are usually non-believers. Food for thought in your poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thanks Dolly for your supportive review
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hey there Trish, This is something I used to enjoy when I was a lot younger, watching the clouds. Actually, while I was in Ohio, I noticed the clouds a lot. They were remarkable. They were all different shapes and forms. Sometimes I could see the most amazing things in the clouds but most of all I see God's power and majesty in the clouds. So your post is very true. I agree.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Hey there Trish, This is something I used to enjoy when I was a lot younger, watching the clouds. Actually, while I was in Ohio, I noticed the clouds a lot. They were remarkable. They were all different shapes and forms. Sometimes I could see the most amazing things in the clouds but most of all I see God's power and majesty in the clouds. So your post is very true. I agree.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thanks Tier, I appreciate your views and review as always
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You are so right. As we watch, not only do we find peace but we also get new ideas just by listenening to the sounds as we watch our moving picrues.lol
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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You are so right. As we watch, not only do we find peace but we also get new ideas just by listenening to the sounds as we watch our moving picrues.lol
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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I was told to '"stop daydreaming , child" I probably had my head in the clouds to see changes LOL thanks for your kind review.
Comment from bsmath
The picture you chose for your poem is beautiful. A 5-7-5 haiku poem.
I have also found thinking about a cloudy day can help me settle down if I am upset about anything. Your poem seems a little vague, though. I enjoyed reading it!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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The picture you chose for your poem is beautiful. A 5-7-5 haiku poem.
I have also found thinking about a cloudy day can help me settle down if I am upset about anything. Your poem seems a little vague, though. I enjoyed reading it!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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Could you clarify ' little vague' for me please.- about what? I appreciate your seasoned opinion. Thanks for reviewing
Comment from frogbook
Great pic and a very affirming poem you have here containing much in a few lines. A little gem of hope and makes us all feel better.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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Great pic and a very affirming poem you have here containing much in a few lines. A little gem of hope and makes us all feel better.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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For those who don't believe in angels , here's one! Thanks so much for reviewing
Hugs Trisha
