Where Purple Iris Grow
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Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a beautiful poem, my friend. I love your dreams, playing amongst the stars, Frank Sinatra, Viking ships, dancing in Spain, skiing the Alps. Wow! Sounds amazing.
Ahh, then just feeling your tranquility, in your lovely Victorian home, with exquisite purple Iris sounds simply divine. I definetly think your grass is greener, lol. Great job. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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This is a beautiful poem, my friend. I love your dreams, playing amongst the stars, Frank Sinatra, Viking ships, dancing in Spain, skiing the Alps. Wow! Sounds amazing.
Ahh, then just feeling your tranquility, in your lovely Victorian home, with exquisite purple Iris sounds simply divine. I definetly think your grass is greener, lol. Great job. ~Kerry
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you Kerry for your encouraging review.
Comment from Bard's Bride
Perfect rhythm with strong rhymes.
Wonderful expression of Love and the other side of the fence really isn't greener.
Nice format as it appears that you are debating with yourself. Good luck in the contest!! BB
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Perfect rhythm with strong rhymes.
Wonderful expression of Love and the other side of the fence really isn't greener.
Nice format as it appears that you are debating with yourself. Good luck in the contest!! BB
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Thank you BB for the wonderful review and the amazing six stars. I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Natali Holden
I found your poem tranquil and serene. The background color worked well with 'Where Purple Iris Grow'. I didn't find it very romanticy, but at the very end where you said, "But if I traveled round the world
and learned all I could know,
I'd choose to be right here with you
where purple iris grow." there it showed it. Good luck in the love poetry contest!
Natali ;)
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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I found your poem tranquil and serene. The background color worked well with 'Where Purple Iris Grow'. I didn't find it very romanticy, but at the very end where you said, "But if I traveled round the world
and learned all I could know,
I'd choose to be right here with you
where purple iris grow." there it showed it. Good luck in the love poetry contest!
Natali ;)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you Natali for your encouraging review.
Comment from zanya
Heart-warming and uplifting celebration of the love at the centre of ones life held dear and a precious gift'ponder what I know' -purple being the color of the chakra of thought and enlightenment -beautiful meditation- simplicity is the key
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Heart-warming and uplifting celebration of the love at the centre of ones life held dear and a precious gift'ponder what I know' -purple being the color of the chakra of thought and enlightenment -beautiful meditation- simplicity is the key
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you Zanya for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Beautiful. I like the home is where the heart is undertone. Your descriptive phrases were very moving. You painted a serene and lovely scene. Very calming. I enjoyed your poem very much. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Beautiful. I like the home is where the heart is undertone. Your descriptive phrases were very moving. You painted a serene and lovely scene. Very calming. I enjoyed your poem very much. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Thank you Grethrn for the wonderful review and the amazing six stars. I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a beautiful poem, well constructed in its fluid movement and exquisite stanza format - rhyming is easy and flows
smoothly into succeeding lines - truly a lovely poem...
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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In my opinion, a beautiful poem, well constructed in its fluid movement and exquisite stanza format - rhyming is easy and flows
smoothly into succeeding lines - truly a lovely poem...
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
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You are very welcome - my pleasure, I assure you...
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi
What a wonderful love poem, nicely stitched with heartfelt passion and feelings, the lovely colours painted throughout bring the emotive heart of your words together brilliantly.
Absolutely loved it.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Hi
What a wonderful love poem, nicely stitched with heartfelt passion and feelings, the lovely colours painted throughout bring the emotive heart of your words together brilliantly.
Absolutely loved it.
Mitchell
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you Mitchell for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Comment from LindaJWolff
Beautifully written! Such imagery that moves from your four walls to the galaxy, moon, also the description of the flowers outside the Victorian home. Simply wonderful read.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Beautifully written! Such imagery that moves from your four walls to the galaxy, moon, also the description of the flowers outside the Victorian home. Simply wonderful read.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you Linda for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
VERY BEAUTIFLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND
I ABSOLUTLY LOVED THIS WRITE
AND THE COLOR IS ABSOLUTLY BEAUTIFUL
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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VERY BEAUTIFLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND
I ABSOLUTLY LOVED THIS WRITE
AND THE COLOR IS ABSOLUTLY BEAUTIFUL
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Thank you Abby for the wonderful review and the amazing six stars. I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from LaRosa
Oh, so sweet and so heart rendering!
Grandchild and Grandparent alike dream of things that 'could be' while at the same time learning that where we are is quite special too. I think they dream forward, we dream, period. Who knows when or how one might sail a Viking ship or dance Flamenco in Spain?
I enjoyed the reverie encapsulated here. All things are possible. But being with a loved one is Joy.
I love the use of the lavender screen, the purple irises, the blue room imagery. You set a calm, serene stage to evoke a sense of gentle belonging while the whispers of fantasy play in your head.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Oh, so sweet and so heart rendering!
Grandchild and Grandparent alike dream of things that 'could be' while at the same time learning that where we are is quite special too. I think they dream forward, we dream, period. Who knows when or how one might sail a Viking ship or dance Flamenco in Spain?
I enjoyed the reverie encapsulated here. All things are possible. But being with a loved one is Joy.
I love the use of the lavender screen, the purple irises, the blue room imagery. You set a calm, serene stage to evoke a sense of gentle belonging while the whispers of fantasy play in your head.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Thank you LaRosa for the wonderful review and the amazing six stars. I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
