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Dragons of the Sea

free verse

19 total reviews 
Comment from GLOBALEYES
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Very nice. The visual text is its own vessel of knowledge. Simple, but profound. Everything has purpose. Everything born with survival instinct. Constant change.
Thank you for the reminder. Betty Davis

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    I am so honored by your generous amount of stars and taking time to read this poem. Seahorses are so beautiful and are poetry in motion. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Bichon
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Lovely poem. Sea horses are very magical creatures, I could watch them for hours. I like how you called them the dragons of the sea, they certainly are. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from patcelaw
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Author this os a wonderfully written poem for the contest. Good luck in the contest. The seahorse is the only things I know of in nature that gives birth to the young. Blessings, Patricia

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from tfawcus
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A very informative poem from a zoological point of view. I learnt quite a few new facts about the sea-dragon or sea-horse. We have leafy sea dragons in this part of the world - masters of disguise! I like the way you end your poem. I can imagine it going down well in the classroom.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    Sea dragons are so beautiful, I have seen them at aquariums. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from nbonner
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I like the imagery used in this dragon poem. My son was actually infatuated with sea dragon when he was younger. I liked, thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written free verse poem about the dragon of the ocean. Not many saw these little creatures in real life situation except in an aquatium. They are intriguing little sea creatures indeed.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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I used o scuba div and often came across horsefish. They come in many colors and are some of the most amazing of all of God's creations. I never disturbed them, but left them for others to enjoy.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    How awesome to see these creatures! Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from June Sargent
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I've always admired these small, unassuming creatures of the sea - especially the males who took care of the young. You painted a picture with words that was accompanied by great artwork. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from pome lover
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how delightful.
The seahorse is beautifully described. I love "a dragon of benevolence." Also love the subtle and lovely way you include the fact that it is he - the male - that has the babies, and also fulfills his duty as teacher.
Great entry for the dragon contest. good luck.
pome lover

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from kahpot
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What a beautifully written poem on a most impressive Dragon, great artwork and yes noble is a good description of their features very well done and good luck****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine