Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello dragonpoet
I like your Lanturne Poetry contest entry

of how when you listen to Gods' voice calling you we should follow the path He directs us to is nicely written about God helps us to choose our Destiny

Gert

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017

Thanks for the review, Gert. Glad you liked it.

Joan

Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

Beautiful... I hear the trumpets sound. It seems strange that a few words written with understanding of the written word can move mountains and make sinners see the love of the heart. It moves me. Good luck on the Lanturne contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017

Thanks. I am glad it moved you. I appreciate the good luck wishes.

dp

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

There is comfort in your words. If we listen to God's voice, we will follow our destiny. Excellent poetic form and an excellent faith based poem. I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

I appreciate your kind words and high rating. Glad you enjoyed it.

dp

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is very good. You should do well in the contest. I tried to write a Japanese lanturne poem once, but it would up looking like a Coleman Lantern poem.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017

Thanks for the kind words and all the stars. Well a lanturn is a lantnurne, isn't it.

dp

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Lanturne poem. God is calling us every day to follow Him so that He can guide us to our final destination. We just need to listen to hear His voice.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks for reading and reviewing

dp

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your lanturne poem "Follow the path" You followed all the rules for this genre, though I think a photo would enhance your poem.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review and the good luck wishes.

dragonpoet

reply by marybell1 on 03-Sep-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

reply by marybell1 on 03-Sep-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Dragonpoet, this is a good entry for the Lanturne poem contest. A brief format with restricted syllables but your poem is a strong spiritual piece. Very good! ~DD

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017

Thanks for the kind words and high rating.

dp

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

It seems that it is indeed the destiny of some to be called by the voice of God while others remain deaf, and the form of the Lanturne shines a pleasing light on the idea. How sad it is that there are so many different and warring interpretations in this world of what or who the true God is. So many divisions when there should be unity.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017

Glad you found it to be a positive poem. I meant it to be; Thanks for all the stars.

Joan

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing your entry in the Lanturne Poetry contest. God's voice does indeed call us to our destiny. Did you purposely leave out a picture or any enhancement to your font?

It seems like this could have been enhanced to give us a great presentation of God's voice,

~patty~

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I rarely use artwork unless it is a picture this prompt or a find a perfect picture right away.
I know that may make me sound lazy but I say that if you get published in standard print poems are almost never illustrated so I try to let the words create the image or emotion.

Joan

Comment from nbonner

Excellent

We are all destined to pass some day, we just pray it's to God we go to. I liked. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017

Thanks for the review and the good luck wishes. Both are much appreciated.

dragonpoet