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Haiku Club Challenges, Book II

Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "haiku (ragged mountains) "
an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets

15 total reviews 
Comment from robina1978
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An excellent photo that complements your tiny poem really well. It looks so nice, and you turned into a very well written Haiku. I am not so good with this form.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    Thank you so much, Robina. I'm really glad you liked it. I like to write haiku. Thanks again. all the best. Ulla:)))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Gorgeous view and wonderfully written poem. I so enjoy your poetry. You are multi-talented and we get the benefits from it. Thank you for sharing. I appreciate it.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    Ahhh, thanks a lot, Barbara. This really warms my heart. Ulla:))x
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hola guapa, como estas? Yo tirandillo.

Beautiful haiku addition for our Haiku Club Challenge book, my friend. Thank you for writing it. I love the imagery that entices my imagination of beautiful Spanish groves. Great job!

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    Muchisimas gracias. Un abrazo, Ulla:)))
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I'm not a lot on rocky mountain country, but as long as it overlooks water, even from a distance, it's a happy place to be for me. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. :-)

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    Thanks so much, Ric, All best. Ulla:))
Comment from Heather Knight
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This is a great description, Ulla.
Especially considering you have only used a few words. The image of the mountains embracing the valley is very powerful. And you have even managed to use two adjectives.
Great picture as well.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    Thanks so much, Maria Jose, So glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Ulla.

Sorry I haven't been around much, lately... my life is waaaaay to busy.

This is a great little addition to the book and the picture is mind-blowing.

I Googled "Ragged" and I think it should be "Rugged" but I could be way off the mark as well.

Great job on this hard form of poetry, you've nailed it.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    Hi Fez, thank you so much. I know what your saying, but I do mean. Ragged. There is a difference. Thanks a lot again. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment from Commando
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A most commendable haiku (ragged mountains) addition to your book, Ulla. An awesome nature imagery of the ragged mountain peak in its self, and green orange groves below. Of course, your photo is the most beautiful imagery of them all. Oh,
that'll cost you an orange. I love your writing, sweetheart! Best wishes for good
health and happiness always.
Bill

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    Thanks a lot, Bill for your great recognition. I'm overwhelmed. So glad you like it. Ulla xxx
reply by Commando on 27-Aug-2017
    Oh, my God! "How formal." I said, "your photo is the most beautiful imagery of them all!" Did that not deserve, a "thank you, darling?" And are you "mailing me an orange?" Gee-whiz! Now, you've
    gone and hurt my feelings, beautiful! Thank you
    for replying, my dear friend.
    Respectfully,
    Bill
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
    Oh my God, I never meant to hurt your feelings. Of course I was glad you liked the photo. But I'm not one to use flowery words when I'm speaking. I just saw it as a nice compliment from you. Sorry if I hurt your feelings. Ulla xx
reply by Commando on 28-Aug-2017
    Oh, I don't know if I'll forgive or not! Tell you what, write me an email, say, "I'm gonna bite your tongue if you don't forgive," and we'll discuss it at dinner. Can you handle that, baby? Can you, huh? I love chatting with you. ...Bill xx
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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I thought your Haiku picked out some very pertinent points, especially the ragged mountains featured in the picture, Ulla. That view must've been magnificent, and we all know Spain is famous for oranges, Yum! Smiles, Giddy

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    Thanks a lot, Giddy. Yeah it's a great view from El Penyo some 400 meters above us. Yeah the valley below are full of orange groves. Thanks for the great review. Hugs. Ulla::)xx
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice photo.
-Syllable count is good.
-Excellent nature imagery that
gives a good word picture of the scene.
-Its nice to see the area where you are.
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    Thanks a lot, Pam. I so appreciate this lovely review. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Aug-2017
    You are welcome, Ulla.
Comment from Irish Rain
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A simply gorgeous picture to go with your stunning haiku. I've never seen an orange grove, so you've enlightened me this evening!!! Loved this, blessings....

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
    Awww, thank you so much, Irish. How pleased I am. All best. Ulla:))))