From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "In any hour"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Shysea
Hello Vance! I was so touched with your poem.I can also relate to what you feel at the moment eventhough i am not yet on that stage or situation.I encountered lots of cases as yours in my workplace.I know 20 years or less than 20 years from now i'Il be in that situation too wherein I might experience a set of physical limitations and emotional challenges due to aging.All of us really dont want to grow old and get sick .Many are looking for a scientific solution just to have a solution of the aging problem but they failed.The reason of that failure is because of the imperfection that we enherited from Adam and Eve as stated in Romans 5:12.The original purpose of God for mankind is to live forever happily in paradise on earth.The sacrificial death of God's son Jesus Christ provided a way for us to experience again God's original purpose for mankind.Psalms 37:29 stated:"The righteous will possess the earth ,and they will reside forever on it.What a happy hope for us!I am sure you want also that kind of life.Eventhough what we experience at present makes us sad since we grow old,we get sick and finally we will die but the promise of God will make us hopeful.We can still live happily despite of the situation by having a positive attitude.I really like the lines in your poem "the richness of your faith shall carry you in joy and your gratitude will deny any fear" You are really right, Vance!We can only have that faith if we have a regular communication with God.We can do it through prayer and reading His word " the Bible".Your poem really affect the emotion of the reader.Usually poem is touching if it came from the inner emotion of the author.Most of the poems I wrote is based from my own experience that is why I loved to read poems that will touch my emotion.
I feel so sad knowing that you are struggling from Alzheimer's disease.Eventhough it is a progressive neurodegenerative disease where dementia symptoms gradually worsen over a number of years you can do something to slow it's progress.There is current temporay treatment /interventions for cognitive symptoms and you can do something to slow the worsening dementia symptoms.There are medications to treat the cognitive symptoms though it cannot stop the damage that Alzheimer's causes to our brain cells but those medication will be of great help to stabilize certain chemicals involved in carrying messages among the brain nerve cells.Aside from medications (if you are already taking medicine) your poem writing hobby and effective communication system can be of great help.Let your family be involved in your struggles.You cant do it alone!You need a support system:friends, family and the fanstory community. Most of all strengthening
the relationship with our Creator is very important.Person with Alzheimer's with the help of family should have these goals in mind as focus of treatment:how to maintain quality of life, having safe environment,maximizing functions in daily activities;enhancing cognition,mood and behavior and promoting social engagement.The health professionals will help you and your family to know the the specific interventions so that you will become successful in your struggles.Always remember that nowadays (unlike during the Bible times)God will not cure our sickness in a miraculous way for God will do it in the promised future under Christ's rulership but still He makes a way and provides a source of relief.He can use other people to help us and He provided lots of help and guidance on how we will be able to successfully solve the problem.Maintain a happy life despite of life's imperfections!Sorry for making you tired reading this very long comment.When I am touched with the poem I read , I was motivated to share more.
With christian love and concern,
Shysea
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Hello Vance! I was so touched with your poem.I can also relate to what you feel at the moment eventhough i am not yet on that stage or situation.I encountered lots of cases as yours in my workplace.I know 20 years or less than 20 years from now i'Il be in that situation too wherein I might experience a set of physical limitations and emotional challenges due to aging.All of us really dont want to grow old and get sick .Many are looking for a scientific solution just to have a solution of the aging problem but they failed.The reason of that failure is because of the imperfection that we enherited from Adam and Eve as stated in Romans 5:12.The original purpose of God for mankind is to live forever happily in paradise on earth.The sacrificial death of God's son Jesus Christ provided a way for us to experience again God's original purpose for mankind.Psalms 37:29 stated:"The righteous will possess the earth ,and they will reside forever on it.What a happy hope for us!I am sure you want also that kind of life.Eventhough what we experience at present makes us sad since we grow old,we get sick and finally we will die but the promise of God will make us hopeful.We can still live happily despite of the situation by having a positive attitude.I really like the lines in your poem "the richness of your faith shall carry you in joy and your gratitude will deny any fear" You are really right, Vance!We can only have that faith if we have a regular communication with God.We can do it through prayer and reading His word " the Bible".Your poem really affect the emotion of the reader.Usually poem is touching if it came from the inner emotion of the author.Most of the poems I wrote is based from my own experience that is why I loved to read poems that will touch my emotion.
I feel so sad knowing that you are struggling from Alzheimer's disease.Eventhough it is a progressive neurodegenerative disease where dementia symptoms gradually worsen over a number of years you can do something to slow it's progress.There is current temporay treatment /interventions for cognitive symptoms and you can do something to slow the worsening dementia symptoms.There are medications to treat the cognitive symptoms though it cannot stop the damage that Alzheimer's causes to our brain cells but those medication will be of great help to stabilize certain chemicals involved in carrying messages among the brain nerve cells.Aside from medications (if you are already taking medicine) your poem writing hobby and effective communication system can be of great help.Let your family be involved in your struggles.You cant do it alone!You need a support system:friends, family and the fanstory community. Most of all strengthening
the relationship with our Creator is very important.Person with Alzheimer's with the help of family should have these goals in mind as focus of treatment:how to maintain quality of life, having safe environment,maximizing functions in daily activities;enhancing cognition,mood and behavior and promoting social engagement.The health professionals will help you and your family to know the the specific interventions so that you will become successful in your struggles.Always remember that nowadays (unlike during the Bible times)God will not cure our sickness in a miraculous way for God will do it in the promised future under Christ's rulership but still He makes a way and provides a source of relief.He can use other people to help us and He provided lots of help and guidance on how we will be able to successfully solve the problem.Maintain a happy life despite of life's imperfections!Sorry for making you tired reading this very long comment.When I am touched with the poem I read , I was motivated to share more.
With christian love and concern,
Shysea
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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THANK YOU AGAIN SHYSEA, FOR THIS WONDERFUL REVIEW & STARS AND PLEASE KNOW THAT I SINCERELY LOVE TO HEAR FROM YOU AS YOUR MIND IS GREATLY IN TUNE WITH MINE!! BLESSINGS ALWAYS! VANCE
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your evocative, spiritual poem with its focus on time and the power of joy. Your free verse is quite compelling. Here's to gratitude! Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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I admired your evocative, spiritual poem with its focus on time and the power of joy. Your free verse is quite compelling. Here's to gratitude! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much Joan, for this lovely review and stars, I appreciate it very much and delighted to hear from you! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, Vance, this is so elegant, so sweet - yes, our fears rest with Him when our faith is strong, and time marches on for all (although sometimes it feels like it runs, doesn't it? LOL)! What a lovely poem! I enjoyed it very much - so comforting!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Oh, Vance, this is so elegant, so sweet - yes, our fears rest with Him when our faith is strong, and time marches on for all (although sometimes it feels like it runs, doesn't it? LOL)! What a lovely poem! I enjoyed it very much - so comforting!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much Dawn...I knew if there was anyone out there who would really appreciate this, it would bed you! Thanks so much and Blessings always! Vance
Comment from LIJ Red
A strong faith poem, one that reaches out to those like me, living on His generosity
long beyond three score and ten. Cannot see any changes I would make.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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A strong faith poem, one that reaches out to those like me, living on His generosity
long beyond three score and ten. Cannot see any changes I would make.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much for you kind review and stars! And congratulations on your sincere Gratitude for HIS Blessings. All the best and hope to see you again soon. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from tfawcus
A strong image here of the grate being cleaned out as "the ashes of the fires of youth" are swept out and scattered to the four winds, enabling the spirit of the fire to ascend into the comforting haven of the heavens. I like the way you have developed this. It has a timeless quality about it.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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A strong image here of the grate being cleaned out as "the ashes of the fires of youth" are swept out and scattered to the four winds, enabling the spirit of the fire to ascend into the comforting haven of the heavens. I like the way you have developed this. It has a timeless quality about it.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thank you Tony, for this lovely review and stars, so much appreciated! Vance
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual poem, In Any Hour, is a joyful testimony of how life can be good, in its entirety, with the certainty of a powerful, and gracious God holding the present and future. Nice.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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This spiritual poem, In Any Hour, is a joyful testimony of how life can be good, in its entirety, with the certainty of a powerful, and gracious God holding the present and future. Nice.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much Bill, for this lovely review and stars, much appreciated indeed! Vance
Comment from ronnie k
"Come near and be warmed,rested in my love" your post I have missed,your direct to the point, no puzzle to be put together your post "I am poet love me"
Thank for being present
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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"Come near and be warmed,rested in my love" your post I have missed,your direct to the point, no puzzle to be put together your post "I am poet love me"
Thank for being present
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much Ronnie, for your kind review and stars. They are greatly appreciated! Vance
Comment from moongirlwriter
As we get older, we know that true peace comes with our walk with God. Tears might be present but they are for the living and peace comes with our faith in God.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2017
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As we get older, we know that true peace comes with our walk with God. Tears might be present but they are for the living and peace comes with our faith in God.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2017
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WOW Moongirlwriter..What a great review and wonderful stars...and most of all, meeting you! I really appreciate this lovely review and I sincerely hope to see you often. Kindest regards and thanks! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
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you're welcome. I'm enjoying meeting new fs writing friends.
Comment from Janilou
Delightful a d comforting thoughts. Loved the analogy of sweeping away the ashes of age.
Well done. I found nothing to correct and have no suggestions for improvement. It's a very lovely poem.
Jan
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2017
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Delightful a d comforting thoughts. Loved the analogy of sweeping away the ashes of age.
Well done. I found nothing to correct and have no suggestions for improvement. It's a very lovely poem.
Jan
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much janilou , wonderful to hear from you and thanks for the lovely stars! Blessings! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from dmt1967
I like the picture of the workings of a clock as it fitted really well into the poem about father time. The link was there for all to see which was nice. Thank you for sharing and have a nice week.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2017
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I like the picture of the workings of a clock as it fitted really well into the poem about father time. The link was there for all to see which was nice. Thank you for sharing and have a nice week.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2017
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Thanks dmt, for the fine review and stars, all much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS:Vance
