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Day at the Pond

A nonet

7 total reviews 
Comment from kathleenspalding
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Excellent and entertaining nonet poem flows well and paints a vivid and humorous mental picture. Perfect use of artwork and colors. Well done!

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
    Thank you!
reply by kathleenspalding on 17-Aug-2017
    You're welcome
Comment from Irish Rain
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What a truly delightful entry in this contest!! I love the rainbow bubbles blown by the kissing Koi!! This is just pure enchanting fun!! Blessings...

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    Thank you for enjoying my vision!
Comment from humpwhistle
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A very appealing flight of fancy.
You do a very nice job of describing
the various denizens of pond society.
Well done.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your kind consideration.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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thank you for sharing your nonet poem contest entry. Your words depict a lovely time on the pond, and your chosen artwork is the perfect compliment. Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    Appreciate the positive feedback!
Comment from RodG
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I like how you have used your nature "camera" to make us see first the lily, pads, then the koi, and finally the frog who seems to speak to us. A nice You Tube video with words.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    I'm strictly Old School and seldom use You Tube. But glad I was able to paint with my words a video!
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Wow, this is so picturesque! I saw every move of that dragonfly and bullfrog. The you painted the images so well with your words.

The nonet also gave me a slight adrenaline rush when that dragonfly crossed the path of the bullfrog.

This nonet is well-executed.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
    Appreciate your kind and insightful review!
Comment from nbonner
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Good imagery used in this poem. I can actually see the dragon fly's flying over the bullfrog like I was there. Thank you for sharing and good luck on the contest

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
    Thank you for the positive feedback!