Dragon Fire!
A contest entry of poetry about dragons.14 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
My dear friend (whose name I won't mention for sake of contest anonymity)
I came over for a reciprocal review and found this delightful poem about dragons. I'm so glad I stopped by!! This is the perfect poetic form for this particular content. It works beautifully! I think it should be a strong contender in the voting! Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
My dear friend (whose name I won't mention for sake of contest anonymity)
I came over for a reciprocal review and found this delightful poem about dragons. I'm so glad I stopped by!! This is the perfect poetic form for this particular content. It works beautifully! I think it should be a strong contender in the voting! Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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Thanks Robyn for reviewing and your kind comments and good luck wishes.
Comment from Boogienights
I really like your poem about dragons. Great choice of pictures and color , and wonderful imagery .I could almost fire their fire! I wish you much luck in the contest with this strong entry.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
I really like your poem about dragons. Great choice of pictures and color , and wonderful imagery .I could almost fire their fire! I wish you much luck in the contest with this strong entry.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reviewing and your kind comments and good luck wishes.
Comment from nbonner
Wow! I can actually picture the dragons and the beauty of them. This was a great short poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck on the contest
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
Wow! I can actually picture the dragons and the beauty of them. This was a great short poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck on the contest
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reviewing and your kind comments, and for the good luck wishes.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Well written poem depicts dragons.
Colorful language used adds another dimension to the poem.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
Well written poem depicts dragons.
Colorful language used adds another dimension to the poem.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from BeasPeas
I read this terrific poem yesterday using the Bookend Monorhyme form, but waited until today to review it because I wanted to give it a sixer. This is really well done and beautiful to look at, too. Thank you for using the form and doing such a good job with your composition. One tiny typo: lavander (lavender) Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
I read this terrific poem yesterday using the Bookend Monorhyme form, but waited until today to review it because I wanted to give it a sixer. This is really well done and beautiful to look at, too. Thank you for using the form and doing such a good job with your composition. One tiny typo: lavander (lavender) Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Again thanks so much Marilyn.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Your use of Marilyn's own creation known as the Bookend-Monorhyme Poem lent itself well to the short style you chose to use for your entry, Anonymous Poet.
Good true end rhyming all throughout.
Your syllabic count was true to form.
All my best to you in the contest.
~Dean :}
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
Your use of Marilyn's own creation known as the Bookend-Monorhyme Poem lent itself well to the short style you chose to use for your entry, Anonymous Poet.
Good true end rhyming all throughout.
Your syllabic count was true to form.
All my best to you in the contest.
~Dean :}
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for reviewing and your kind comments, I really like your characters you added. And thank you for the good luck wishes.
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Anytime. :)
Comment from jaded831
Great poem, you captured a dragon admirably. Your poem read smoothly and met the criteria. The picture compliments your creative poem. Hard to say anything bad when you like everything about the poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
Great poem, you captured a dragon admirably. Your poem read smoothly and met the criteria. The picture compliments your creative poem. Hard to say anything bad when you like everything about the poem. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for reviewing and for your fantastic and kind comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written bookend rhyme the requirements of the poem is met. The topicf dragons are portrayexmd masterfully and the photo is an excellent choice.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
A very well-written bookend rhyme the requirements of the poem is met. The topicf dragons are portrayexmd masterfully and the photo is an excellent choice.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from gene roush
This is very cool.
Thanks for describing the form. The stand alone aspect of the poem(s) has to add to the challenge.
Poetry is beyond me. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Gene
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
This is very cool.
Thanks for describing the form. The stand alone aspect of the poem(s) has to add to the challenge.
Poetry is beyond me. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Gene
Comment Written 11-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for reviewing. PS poetry is beyond me as well, I tend to be successful once in a blue moon.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is excellent a poem with two differing styles yet you maintain consistent excellent rhyming from begining to end. A great contest entry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
This is excellent a poem with two differing styles yet you maintain consistent excellent rhyming from begining to end. A great contest entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reviewing and your kind comments. I appreciate your good luck wishes.