Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

We can't relive childhood, but our children can repeat our past. Please just the good things in life. Well thought out poem. Nicely written with great visual imagery created. Good artwork choice. Great work. Good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017

Hello sunnilicious, I thank you for the visit and the wonderful review; enjoy the weekend.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for reminding us about the Shadorma form. I admired your capturing the nostalgia of childhood, intensified by your use of alliteration and evocative imagery. I am certain your friend will be pleased. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017

I thank you my friend, so glad you liked the write; take care.

Comment from EverInParadise

Excellent

An interesting piece with a perfect piece of art. Nice rhythm to the words, this will bring many memories as it is read.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017

My friend, I am pleased that you stopped by; appreciate the time and the encouraging review, thank you.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Shadorma. According to the rules description your syllable count is spot on and the subject choice was heart warming. The photo was an excellent complement to your writing.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017

Hello Sandra, I appreciate your time and the wonderful comments, thank you very much.