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haiku and haiga

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Comment from Cindy Warren
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Haha, I think those trees will eventually touch. I guess they have no choice about the monogamy part. I don't see any other trees around. Thanks for the smile.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2017

Comment from rspoet
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Neither do I, but a fine haiga it is
with excellent imagery of the spruce trees
I'll bet they touch at night when the breeze blows
Perhaps: Tantalize
Well done
RS

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2017

Comment from Dean Kuch
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Well, if they'd been another type of tree, you might have gotten Mahogany monogamy, lol.
Can't a spruce just reach out and touch a brother?
Geesh...
~Dean

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2017