Sunshine
Making the world brighter16 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. This is a lovely and well-written poem. The artwork is beautiful and compliments your writing. It is a great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Excellent. This is a lovely and well-written poem. The artwork is beautiful and compliments your writing. It is a great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Yes, the recent news would make anyone want to cry. It is so sad that the current events are ones of hatred towards the fellow men.
Your poem definitely depicts love, compassion and kindness towards mankind. If only more people had such human qualities....
Good luck in the contest. You heart is on display.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Yes, the recent news would make anyone want to cry. It is so sad that the current events are ones of hatred towards the fellow men.
Your poem definitely depicts love, compassion and kindness towards mankind. If only more people had such human qualities....
Good luck in the contest. You heart is on display.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about mankind, poet thinks of man, by love, kindness or compassion man can make living best and meaningful freely as the sun shines the earth brightly freely; I liked.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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This speaks about mankind, poet thinks of man, by love, kindness or compassion man can make living best and meaningful freely as the sun shines the earth brightly freely; I liked.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for a lovely review.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi
Really enjoyed this heartfelt poem, which flowed effortlessly,
lovely rhythm and lines throughout, stitched fantastically well
which enables your words to sell themselves to the reader.
I particularly enjoyed the imagery shown which paints such a vivid picture in the mind......an excellent poem, that was a pleasure to read.
Mitchell.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Hi
Really enjoyed this heartfelt poem, which flowed effortlessly,
lovely rhythm and lines throughout, stitched fantastically well
which enables your words to sell themselves to the reader.
I particularly enjoyed the imagery shown which paints such a vivid picture in the mind......an excellent poem, that was a pleasure to read.
Mitchell.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Sunshine, puts the price of being a helper on the cost of being yourself. As you've stated, a friendly smile can cut a lot of pain off someone.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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This poem, Sunshine, puts the price of being a helper on the cost of being yourself. As you've stated, a friendly smile can cut a lot of pain off someone.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from sueseagull
Hello! You have written a nice entry for the contest. What you said is so true! We need not have riches to show kindness or compassion to another human being. The best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
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Hello! You have written a nice entry for the contest. What you said is so true! We need not have riches to show kindness or compassion to another human being. The best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Analie Shepherd
Beautiful!
Simple, quiet, heartfelt, honest, compassionate, selfless .... just some of the many words I can use to describe this very lovely poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings, Analie
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Beautiful!
Simple, quiet, heartfelt, honest, compassionate, selfless .... just some of the many words I can use to describe this very lovely poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings, Analie
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Auto-Manic
Yup, best of all it's free. Some people just love to hate. Ever notice when you see a real grump and offer up a smile or a friendly hello they're even more grumpy because you're not. PS. Kill your television.
AM
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Yup, best of all it's free. Some people just love to hate. Ever notice when you see a real grump and offer up a smile or a friendly hello they're even more grumpy because you're not. PS. Kill your television.
AM
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Great advice, thanks for the review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Your words are so true, and right now, in this time of crisis, we all need any sign of hope and compassion. A smile when walking past a person or group conveys a great deal. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Your words are so true, and right now, in this time of crisis, we all need any sign of hope and compassion. A smile when walking past a person or group conveys a great deal. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from EverInParadise
Smiles may not weigh much but they are worth the golden rewards I receive when I give one and it is given back. Your piece is very nice and yes we all have a great supply of smiles to share in our troubled world. Keep smiling and enjoying your gift.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Smiles may not weigh much but they are worth the golden rewards I receive when I give one and it is given back. Your piece is very nice and yes we all have a great supply of smiles to share in our troubled world. Keep smiling and enjoying your gift.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
