The Seasons
Exploring the beauty, wonder, and mystery of each season.22 total reviews
Comment from Oatmeal
Analie Shepherd,
This is a beautiful poem. I liked it very much. It made for an enjoyable read. The flow was smooth. Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings. They were very understandable and comprehensible.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Analie Shepherd,
This is a beautiful poem. I liked it very much. It made for an enjoyable read. The flow was smooth. Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings. They were very understandable and comprehensible.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Thanks! Blessings, Analie
Comment from estory
This is pretty ambitious; you fit into the acrostic, and you had some really great images that captured the essence of each season. Spring bursts on the scene, brightens and grows, summer reaches the zenith, the lazy sunshine, autumn gives us all that fruit and Winter freezes, waits out the resting of life, waiting for spring to come again. little alliterations scattered about give the prose poetry some nice music. estory
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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This is pretty ambitious; you fit into the acrostic, and you had some really great images that captured the essence of each season. Spring bursts on the scene, brightens and grows, summer reaches the zenith, the lazy sunshine, autumn gives us all that fruit and Winter freezes, waits out the resting of life, waiting for spring to come again. little alliterations scattered about give the prose poetry some nice music. estory
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for this lovely review. Blessings, Analie
Comment from Linda Hughes
Each season in the poem has a lovely essence of appreciation, i.e., where spring is of rebirth as the world awakens. Each stanza moves gracefully. And the summer and winter solstice are the ones with the most personality, even though each has its own personality. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Each season in the poem has a lovely essence of appreciation, i.e., where spring is of rebirth as the world awakens. Each stanza moves gracefully. And the summer and winter solstice are the ones with the most personality, even though each has its own personality. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Thank you! I am deeply appreciative and humbled by your review and by the rating.
Blessings, Analie
Comment from crzypnter
A clever way to depict life as well as the seasons. This flowed well and I like the clever undertones which lie within. Great job and s excellent entry into the contest. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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A clever way to depict life as well as the seasons. This flowed well and I like the clever undertones which lie within. Great job and s excellent entry into the contest. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, and for your kind words. Blessings, Analie
Comment from Eternal Muse
Lovely poetic descriptions of each season, this must have been a difficult to write acrostic, and I wish you luck in the site's contest. I penned one myself yesterday.
My favorite season is Autumn, and you've painted such a pretty picture:
Autumn, mysteriously falls into fullness
Untold bounty, heavy-laden green and gold
Nature's last embrace, falling, falling--waning splendor
I especially loved the metaphor of "nature's last embrace".
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Lovely poetic descriptions of each season, this must have been a difficult to write acrostic, and I wish you luck in the site's contest. I penned one myself yesterday.
My favorite season is Autumn, and you've painted such a pretty picture:
Autumn, mysteriously falls into fullness
Untold bounty, heavy-laden green and gold
Nature's last embrace, falling, falling--waning splendor
I especially loved the metaphor of "nature's last embrace".
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the thoughtful review. Autumn is my favorite season also! Blessings, Analie
Comment from sharonlshelley
love your poem and imagination in it and the purple back colour, the picture reflects your picture, good luck with the competition and thanks for sharing, Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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love your poem and imagination in it and the purple back colour, the picture reflects your picture, good luck with the competition and thanks for sharing, Sharon
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Thank you for this lovely review. Blessings, Analie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can identify with this poem with it's sad and harsh undertones of the season's changing and sometimes friendly and sometimes bleak, bringing loneliness into scenes of beauty, I joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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I can identify with this poem with it's sad and harsh undertones of the season's changing and sometimes friendly and sometimes bleak, bringing loneliness into scenes of beauty, I joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Having somebody identify with one's writing is high praise indeed! Thank you!! Blessings, Analie
Comment from Hitcher
I enjoyed the beautiful visuals conjured up from your well crafted Acrostic contest poem friend. I think you did a great job of breathing life into each season, the emotional connection offered by each season also shone through. I wish you well in the contest friend... Impressive!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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I enjoyed the beautiful visuals conjured up from your well crafted Acrostic contest poem friend. I think you did a great job of breathing life into each season, the emotional connection offered by each season also shone through. I wish you well in the contest friend... Impressive!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Thank you for this thoughtful and lovely review! Blessings, Analie
Comment from sunnilicious
Acrostic poems aren't always simple. You did a great job at writing this poem. Well thought out. Lovely visual imagery. Good detailing. Nice alliterations without anything overpowering, which allows thoughts to sail along as the story in poem unfolds. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Acrostic poems aren't always simple. You did a great job at writing this poem. Well thought out. Lovely visual imagery. Good detailing. Nice alliterations without anything overpowering, which allows thoughts to sail along as the story in poem unfolds. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, and for your kind words. Blessings, Analie
Comment from Mara Coy
The poem is deep I like it. I enjoy how nature speaks by itself and how we can interpret life thanks to the seasons that delight us. The adjectives that you use to describe each season were clever to give us another sensation rather than the aging with the years.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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The poem is deep I like it. I enjoy how nature speaks by itself and how we can interpret life thanks to the seasons that delight us. The adjectives that you use to describe each season were clever to give us another sensation rather than the aging with the years.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review! Yes, nature delights ....
