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Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "The Case of the Pikkered Fwen"Animal poetry and short stories
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Good heavens, what a story - I felt like I had fallen into a Dr. Seuss book and couldn't get out... kaloopolo and pickered fwen - you are a fun fwen to have for gwins!! :) ;) And hooray for sloths - of course, my favoritist sloth in the world works at the DMV in the movie 'Zootopia'... lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Good heavens, what a story - I felt like I had fallen into a Dr. Seuss book and couldn't get out... kaloopolo and pickered fwen - you are a fun fwen to have for gwins!! :) ;) And hooray for sloths - of course, my favoritist sloth in the world works at the DMV in the movie 'Zootopia'... lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I liked this one. I?m thinking of moving it to my PEOPLE book.
Comment from michaelcahill
Whatever this is, it sure is entertaining and some crazy genius, Bill. It's fun as hell to read and it isn't necessary to be a kid. It does help to have a couple around to cover up one's own hysterical laughter though. HA! This is killer. Glad to see it getting some recognition. mike
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Whatever this is, it sure is entertaining and some crazy genius, Bill. It's fun as hell to read and it isn't necessary to be a kid. It does help to have a couple around to cover up one's own hysterical laughter though. HA! This is killer. Glad to see it getting some recognition. mike
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Mike. I see you edged me out for second banana in the final reel. Congrats. Bill
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Not yet. HA! The brawl is still underway. :))
We'll see. I don't think we'll catch Dean though. I taught him how to write ya know, this is how he repays me .... :))
Comment from Ogden
Bill, whoda thunk it?! Nonsense, pure, clever, and sly. And thoroughly enjoyable.You put yourself way out on a limb with this gem, nd I hope it pays off. Good luck in the voting!
Don
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Bill, whoda thunk it?! Nonsense, pure, clever, and sly. And thoroughly enjoyable.You put yourself way out on a limb with this gem, nd I hope it pays off. Good luck in the voting!
Don
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Don, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Humorous.
A sloth shaving his face? Now, I'm heard everything!
Found out Idaho was not for him and returned to what he truly enjoyed.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Humorous.
A sloth shaving his face? Now, I'm heard everything!
Found out Idaho was not for him and returned to what he truly enjoyed.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Brett.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Bill
Really enjoyed this fun poem, which flowed effortlessly,
loved the characters,
lovely rhythm and lines throughout,
which enables a nice easy, enjoyable read.
I particularly enjoyed the imagery shown which shows how artistic your mind is.....an excellent poem, that was a pleasure to read.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Hi Bill
Really enjoyed this fun poem, which flowed effortlessly,
loved the characters,
lovely rhythm and lines throughout,
which enables a nice easy, enjoyable read.
I particularly enjoyed the imagery shown which shows how artistic your mind is.....an excellent poem, that was a pleasure to read.
Mitchell
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Mitchell, for the terrific review. Bill
Comment from ElegantButler
Ha ha ha ha ha! That was an amazingly funny and wonderfully inventive poem. The story of the Sloth was amusingly exciting. Great word invention. Would have made Dr. Seuss proud.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Ha ha ha ha ha! That was an amazingly funny and wonderfully inventive poem. The story of the Sloth was amusingly exciting. Great word invention. Would have made Dr. Seuss proud.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you, EB, for the great review. Bill
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hi, Bill. I enjoy a good piece on nonsense and this has all the hallmarks - a few wonderful nonsense words, a narrative that makes some sense in between the nonsensical parts and a few colorful characters.
The meter isn't always perfect, but who cares, and anyway I liked the witty little asides you there in just for fun like:
(she wore black).
Lots of fun. Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
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Hi, Bill. I enjoy a good piece on nonsense and this has all the hallmarks - a few wonderful nonsense words, a narrative that makes some sense in between the nonsensical parts and a few colorful characters.
The meter isn't always perfect, but who cares, and anyway I liked the witty little asides you there in just for fun like:
(she wore black).
Lots of fun. Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 11-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Steve. I guess you don't think sloths shave.
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Perhaps they do, but it would be like painting the Forth Bridge - by the time you get the job finished, it's time to start all over again!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the tale of the sloth named Pikkered Fwen, after adventures and fun, now he comes back home, now there is no race to go for, he is to take his time, not to hurry; I liked.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
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This speaks the tale of the sloth named Pikkered Fwen, after adventures and fun, now he comes back home, now there is no race to go for, he is to take his time, not to hurry; I liked.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem/story about the sloth and his adventures that after years of traveling took him safely home where he could take his time to finish shaving himself.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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A very well-written poem/story about the sloth and his adventures that after years of traveling took him safely home where he could take his time to finish shaving himself.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thanks for giving this a look, Sandra
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Bill, this must have taken you a while to compose. I really enjoyed this light hearted and amusing tale. Who would have thought of a sloth shaving its face - great imagination and a story that is a much fun to read. I particularly enjoyed the pictures, very cute! Great job and good luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Bill, this must have taken you a while to compose. I really enjoyed this light hearted and amusing tale. Who would have thought of a sloth shaving its face - great imagination and a story that is a much fun to read. I particularly enjoyed the pictures, very cute! Great job and good luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thank you, DD, for the neat review. Bill
