Comment from Cybertron1986

Exceptional

I'm giving you six because, it was that good! I the message of humility and humanity. And, to infuse it within the writing scope was just genius on your part. Thanks for a well thought out piece!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Oh, my, thanks. I am so pleased that you thought it worthy of my favorite color green star. You made my day and I appreciate it.

reply by Cybertron1986 on 24-Jul-2017

It was well deserved. I don't review much on my iPhone, but browsing today, I came upon your piece and just could not go through the day without having to review that. (I was afraid I either might lose it, or forget after a long day).

Anyways, because of my iPhone, I realized one word was left out from my review. It should read:

"I LOVE the message of humility and humanity."
There should be more pieces like this here. Again, AWESOME!!!

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Sometimes it's not about the amount that's given but more about the thoughts and reasons behind it.
Unselfish acts like the one this homeless man performed for the young boy in your story reap far greater rewards than mere monetary wealth can be attached to.
Good job with this.
Best of luck in the contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks, my friend. You got my point quite well.

reply by Dean Kuch on 24-Jul-2017

You're very welcome.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A very lovely work. Yes we forget compassion when we think we are lacking, the world chases after the "dollar" perhaps we should chase compassion, as your poetic hero did. Excellent entry in this contest, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks Roy. Always great to hear your opinion.

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

While a hundred words aren't many, you used them very well in this posting. You make it easy to visualize the scene. I can hear him think out loud, "I can't even get me a bottle of Ripple for a buck no more."
Godd luck with this!

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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks much. I like the challenge of trying to bring together a bit of a story with this stingy word count-ha.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a solid entry for the contest
that meets the requirements nicely
It's all in the eyes of the beholder
or the dollar holder, seems one can also be one hundred
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS


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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks much. I like the challenge of these limited word prose pieces.