belly up poolside (haiku)
What, me worry?84 total reviews
Comment from DR DIP
I love it when dogs lay in this submissive style position as if they are soaking up the sun You have captured the moment perfectly. Your words describe the picture perfectly
I don't know how I missed this one, sorry
thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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I love it when dogs lay in this submissive style position as if they are soaking up the sun You have captured the moment perfectly. Your words describe the picture perfectly
I don't know how I missed this one, sorry
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Oh, Dip, it was part of a contest so my fans were not notified. It held the number one slot for two days but came in third in the contest. Thanks.
Comment from misscookie
I must say the photo put an every lasting smile on my face.
Now this is what I call a sweet dogs life.
Basting in the sun not a worry in the world.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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I must say the photo put an every lasting smile on my face.
Now this is what I call a sweet dogs life.
Basting in the sun not a worry in the world.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Oh, thank you, Cookie, for your review. I am thrilled with my niece's picture of my dog.
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Your'e very welcome the picture is awesome!
Cookie
Comment from JW
That is a very cute picture. In viewing it, it reminded me of my dogs. However, with my largest one, I do not have to coax him to lay on his back. Every time it's warm and sunny when we go outside, he'll flop over in a minute.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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That is a very cute picture. In viewing it, it reminded me of my dogs. However, with my largest one, I do not have to coax him to lay on his back. Every time it's warm and sunny when we go outside, he'll flop over in a minute.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you, JW, for your review. I am thrilled with my niece's picture of my dog.
Comment from June Sargent
Pretty much describes all of us in the latter days of summer - even
here in New England. Perfect little poem for the contest. Short and
to the point - great artwork, too!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Pretty much describes all of us in the latter days of summer - even
here in New England. Perfect little poem for the contest. Short and
to the point - great artwork, too!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your review, June. I am quite pleased with the picture my niece took of my dog.
Comment from Pantygynt
You really shouldn't have explained it all. I had you down as a seasoned wildlife photographer. Clever use of a series of standard phrases like belly up, poolside, soaks in the sun and dog days of summer. When all laid out as a haiku become an excellent oexample of the genre.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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You really shouldn't have explained it all. I had you down as a seasoned wildlife photographer. Clever use of a series of standard phrases like belly up, poolside, soaks in the sun and dog days of summer. When all laid out as a haiku become an excellent oexample of the genre.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Jim, for your review of my excellent example of haiku.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a Chihuahua like human being soaks in sun in the same posture like man keeping its belly up poolside like enjoying the day as a dog day of summer; I liked.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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This speaks a Chihuahua like human being soaks in sun in the same posture like man keeping its belly up poolside like enjoying the day as a dog day of summer; I liked.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Alcreator Litt Dear, for your review. I am glad you liked this.
Comment from SarahPenn1
Love the alliteration with "dog days of summer"
The artwork is excellent.
A fun and simplistic poem.
I want to be that dog!!
Shenel x
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Love the alliteration with "dog days of summer"
The artwork is excellent.
A fun and simplistic poem.
I want to be that dog!!
Shenel x
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Yes, Shenel, we all want to be that dog. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Rasmine
This is so cute!! Your niece did well and Mina, too. Congratulations on your third place winner! Yay! I loved the play on words -- 'dog days of summer' :P
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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This is so cute!! Your niece did well and Mina, too. Congratulations on your third place winner! Yay! I loved the play on words -- 'dog days of summer' :P
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Rasmine, for your review and congratulations.
Comment from JACK2
Wonderful graphic to fit this haiku dog day of summer great imaginary depiction leaves the reader with a big smile great job.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Wonderful graphic to fit this haiku dog day of summer great imaginary depiction leaves the reader with a big smile great job.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you, JACK2, for your review and compliments. I appreciate them.
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your welcome
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL this is a cute piece. The lines of imagery give us where and what. then the play on words for the satori brought it home. Nicely done
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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LOL this is a cute piece. The lines of imagery give us where and what. then the play on words for the satori brought it home. Nicely done
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Barb, for your review of my cute piece which made you LOL.
