Bamboo Pole Does Feel So Free
Picture prompt for July 1716 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fishing is truly an art form and without the tenacity you might as well give up as I often did when I fished with friends, many hours without a bite! A poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
Fishing is truly an art form and without the tenacity you might as well give up as I often did when I fished with friends, many hours without a bite! A poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
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Comment from Dean Kuch
This speaks of those halcyon, carefree days of our youth when we would go camping with family and friends during the summer months, Dan.
I don't believe it is written in any particular form or meter, but is gets the point across adequately enough.
~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
This speaks of those halcyon, carefree days of our youth when we would go camping with family and friends during the summer months, Dan.
I don't believe it is written in any particular form or meter, but is gets the point across adequately enough.
~Dean
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi (*<*)
= This is really a neat interpretation, Dan.
= I like how you used the same first letter in each stanza.
= A fun read--written very well. Nice job.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers <> Jax / Jackie
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
Hi (*<*)
= This is really a neat interpretation, Dan.
= I like how you used the same first letter in each stanza.
= A fun read--written very well. Nice job.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers <> Jax / Jackie
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
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Comment from patcelaw
Dan, it is my opinion that every young person should learn how to fish, clean the fish and eat the fish carefully. Nice written take on the picture this challenge. Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
Dan, it is my opinion that every young person should learn how to fish, clean the fish and eat the fish carefully. Nice written take on the picture this challenge. Patricia
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
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Comment from Irish Rain
I like how each set of verses starts with the same letter. This reminds me of camping trips when I was young. I once used a safety pin for a hook! (didn't catch anything) Loved this, blessings...
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
I like how each set of verses starts with the same letter. This reminds me of camping trips when I was young. I once used a safety pin for a hook! (didn't catch anything) Loved this, blessings...
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
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Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I really love the way that this blows it's very soft and subtle. Great alliteration and this. I think that you have wrote a very nice poem for this writing prompt. Thank you so much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lola
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I really love the way that this blows it's very soft and subtle. Great alliteration and this. I think that you have wrote a very nice poem for this writing prompt. Thank you so much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lola
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
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Comment from misscookie
Has been months since I respond to anyone.
I been going through some terrible storms in my life and it really put a hurting on my body mind and writing ability.
Yet I did enjoy reading your write.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
Has been months since I respond to anyone.
I been going through some terrible storms in my life and it really put a hurting on my body mind and writing ability.
Yet I did enjoy reading your write.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Dan,
what a nice entry for this contest
I like the idea of you showing how fishing with a Bamboo pole cause the child to feel like she wants to sing.
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
Hi Dan,
what a nice entry for this contest
I like the idea of you showing how fishing with a Bamboo pole cause the child to feel like she wants to sing.
Gert
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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you are welcome Dan
Gert
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
What a sweet (and tasty) use of words to describe the joy of fishing and enjoying the fruits of one's own labor. The final stanza about cleaning the fish is so true to my own childhood experience - but didn't keep me off the dock either. I really enjoyed your offering for the Picture This challenge and love seeing the diversity of thoughts we put out there from the same source of inspiration. - Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
What a sweet (and tasty) use of words to describe the joy of fishing and enjoying the fruits of one's own labor. The final stanza about cleaning the fish is so true to my own childhood experience - but didn't keep me off the dock either. I really enjoyed your offering for the Picture This challenge and love seeing the diversity of thoughts we put out there from the same source of inspiration. - Wendy
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Fishing with a bamboo pole. Brings back several fond memories.
Well written poem captures its theme spot on.
And, the best part of fishing is eating your catch then going back for another one.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
Fishing with a bamboo pole. Brings back several fond memories.
Well written poem captures its theme spot on.
And, the best part of fishing is eating your catch then going back for another one.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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