Haiku/Haiga
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Michael,
LoL..... not funny.... it is going to give me nightmares. We have been having really hot weather in Sacramento... 108 on Sunday... and the poles are melting. I love the presentation. Well done, honey,
Gypsy hugs
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Hello, Michael,
LoL..... not funny.... it is going to give me nightmares. We have been having really hot weather in Sacramento... 108 on Sunday... and the poles are melting. I love the presentation. Well done, honey,
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well if not for Earth's atmosphere, we would have all fried a long time ago.
Good job on your poem. All syllables look/sound great. I like the picture you chose, too.
The 'LOL' is very revealing.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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Well if not for Earth's atmosphere, we would have all fried a long time ago.
Good job on your poem. All syllables look/sound great. I like the picture you chose, too.
The 'LOL' is very revealing.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
Comment from Cycler
LOL
I could hear the sun exclaiming your words "Joke ... Joke" though it is true. Nice picture to go along with your little haiku. The sun probably thinks alot like you, don't you think?
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LOL
I could hear the sun exclaiming your words "Joke ... Joke" though it is true. Nice picture to go along with your little haiku. The sun probably thinks alot like you, don't you think?
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
