2017 Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "5/7/5 (exotic blue rose)"A collection of my poems
16 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
im happy to have found this poem. it is perfect. Each word makes " a piece of heaven." you wrote a beautiful poem here. That dark blue rose you chose for your image is gorgeous too.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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im happy to have found this poem. it is perfect. Each word makes " a piece of heaven." you wrote a beautiful poem here. That dark blue rose you chose for your image is gorgeous too.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
I liked that your 5-7-5 description can also be considered autobiographical. You also selected the perfect, stunning picture of a blue rose with a dewy tear. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2017
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I liked that your 5-7-5 description can also be considered autobiographical. You also selected the perfect, stunning picture of a blue rose with a dewy tear. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 15-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Joan, I appreciate that you read and reviewed my haiku. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very nice five seven five poem creates a strong mental image and mood using very few words. Love the middle line. Beautiful choice of artwork. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Very nice five seven five poem creates a strong mental image and mood using very few words. Love the middle line. Beautiful choice of artwork. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
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You're welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Exotic Blue Rose, has the proper setup and seems to be the catalyst for musings and those who would be moved to act in a romantic fashion. Nice.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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This 5-7-5, Exotic Blue Rose, has the proper setup and seems to be the catalyst for musings and those who would be moved to act in a romantic fashion. Nice.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Comment from Val Crisson
I am sorry, though a great deal of thought went into the presentation. I find the words confusing, as to why would a blue rose be for lovers and troubadours ? It seems scattered and the last line leaves me wondering about lovers and troubadours. As lovers and troubadours are not necessarily a "piece of heaven" None the less, I am sure it will do well in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I am sorry, though a great deal of thought went into the presentation. I find the words confusing, as to why would a blue rose be for lovers and troubadours ? It seems scattered and the last line leaves me wondering about lovers and troubadours. As lovers and troubadours are not necessarily a "piece of heaven" None the less, I am sure it will do well in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you
Comment from lyenochka
I've never seen a blue rose. I've seen purple ones so there must be blue ones. I wonder why it's symbolic of troubadours. I like the reference to the blueness in "a piece of heaven."
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I've never seen a blue rose. I've seen purple ones so there must be blue ones. I wonder why it's symbolic of troubadours. I like the reference to the blueness in "a piece of heaven."
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Curly Girly
Your poem speaks of romance and of traditional poetry crafters of old.
It conjures up idyllic times of wondrous passion.
A beautiful contest entry for a blue rose!
Blue roses come from modern intervention with hybrid horticulture that is aided by Photoshop.
Nonetheless, a gorgeous image.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Your poem speaks of romance and of traditional poetry crafters of old.
It conjures up idyllic times of wondrous passion.
A beautiful contest entry for a blue rose!
Blue roses come from modern intervention with hybrid horticulture that is aided by Photoshop.
Nonetheless, a gorgeous image.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Comment from Hitcher
The droplet of water balancing on the blue velvet rose petal is too cool Gypsy. A very nice little flower 5-7-5 poem friend !! I'm thinking you will do well in the booth, good luck!!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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The droplet of water balancing on the blue velvet rose petal is too cool Gypsy. A very nice little flower 5-7-5 poem friend !! I'm thinking you will do well in the booth, good luck!!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words, Wayne.
Hugs
Comment from Dean Kuch
A lovely Blue Rose, h-m-m-mmmmm...
Who here that writes such excellent haiku, 5-7-5, and senryu poetry such as this could have entered this in the contest?
Lemme see...
Yep, just as I suspected.
Don't worry, though. I won't mention your name because I realize this is a blind contest.
It is quite lovely however.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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A lovely Blue Rose, h-m-m-mmmmm...
Who here that writes such excellent haiku, 5-7-5, and senryu poetry such as this could have entered this in the contest?
Lemme see...
Yep, just as I suspected.
Don't worry, though. I won't mention your name because I realize this is a blind contest.
It is quite lovely however.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words, Dean.
Hugs
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
A blue rose is a unusual color. There aren't very many blue colored flowers in existence - and that's a shame. --sigh-- They are so pretty in a garden, for contrast. Good luck in your contest!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Dear Mystery Poet,
A blue rose is a unusual color. There aren't very many blue colored flowers in existence - and that's a shame. --sigh-- They are so pretty in a garden, for contrast. Good luck in your contest!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
