Perennials of War
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Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Barbara
Another excellent post in a long line of posts. The characters really moved the story forward. The historical aspect was spot on. Enjoyed.
Question regarding the concentration and extermination camps . . .where not nine million killed, six million being those who were Jewish?
One possible nit "There and at Dachau my skin crawl(ed)."
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Good morning, Barbara
Another excellent post in a long line of posts. The characters really moved the story forward. The historical aspect was spot on. Enjoyed.
Question regarding the concentration and extermination camps . . .where not nine million killed, six million being those who were Jewish?
One possible nit "There and at Dachau my skin crawl(ed)."
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I w ill check that area out.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Barbara.
Well, I am getting punctual at this reading caper lol.
Beautifully written with not a word out of place that I could spot. It is such a tragic tale and time in history and you portrayed the emotion in the telling of her story perfectly.
Great work and enjoy you holiday.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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G'day Barbara.
Well, I am getting punctual at this reading caper lol.
Beautifully written with not a word out of place that I could spot. It is such a tragic tale and time in history and you portrayed the emotion in the telling of her story perfectly.
Great work and enjoy you holiday.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review. Please stick around.
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lol. I'll try, mate, I'll try. I miss all you nice people and your wonderful work when I can't get on here.
Comment from Ben Colder
Years ago I did a write using the H. M, Check your time line. 39 we enter the war for this purpose and Hitler regime. u did well with your research u made it very interesting. There is a documentation along these topics as well. They made a movie about stolen art, it too was interesting, Well done Barb.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Years ago I did a write using the H. M, Check your time line. 39 we enter the war for this purpose and Hitler regime. u did well with your research u made it very interesting. There is a documentation along these topics as well. They made a movie about stolen art, it too was interesting, Well done Barb.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Curly Girly
The Jews have my sympathy. What was done to them in the war was terrible. I have heard all about Auschwitz; it is a place that I could not bear to visit. Just hearing about the atrocities has given me sleepless nights.
My thoughts about this chapter:
1. I'm still waiting to hear why the painting is important--but I'm sure that is coming soon.
2. You wrote:
"Basically anybody the Nazis didn't like or understand," added Philip. "It probably included Jehovah's Witness, Roman Catholics, ...
Okay, the above part may require a little more research. I am not terribly knowledgeable but I have watched a few documentaries on TV regarding the war. *It is believed that Hitler was a Roman Catholic (I am sure in name only) but nonetheless; therefore, maybe 'Roman Catholics' should not be included in Phillip's list above.
Just my thoughts.
Nicole
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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The Jews have my sympathy. What was done to them in the war was terrible. I have heard all about Auschwitz; it is a place that I could not bear to visit. Just hearing about the atrocities has given me sleepless nights.
My thoughts about this chapter:
1. I'm still waiting to hear why the painting is important--but I'm sure that is coming soon.
2. You wrote:
"Basically anybody the Nazis didn't like or understand," added Philip. "It probably included Jehovah's Witness, Roman Catholics, ...
Okay, the above part may require a little more research. I am not terribly knowledgeable but I have watched a few documentaries on TV regarding the war. *It is believed that Hitler was a Roman Catholic (I am sure in name only) but nonetheless; therefore, maybe 'Roman Catholics' should not be included in Phillip's list above.
Just my thoughts.
Nicole
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Researched showed they also hated Roman Catholic and the practicing ones were in camps. Hitler also had Jews in his ancestry. Thank you for the kind review. Shana's answer is in my next post. Not sure when I'm posting it, but will try on vacation.
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Okay, thanks, Barbara. I'm glad you researched that aspect--it's not something they say in documentaries but they should. I heard that Hitler was part Jewish--I wonder if he knew. We are all descendants of Adam and Eve and all have Jewish blood.
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I doubt Hitler cared.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Barb
= I can't imagine the horror the people went through, but having to talk about what one's family endured has to this day be most overwhelming.
= Well written chapter, my friend.
= Enjoy your vacation. Always wonderful to get away.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers <> Jax / Jackie
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Hi, Barb
= I can't imagine the horror the people went through, but having to talk about what one's family endured has to this day be most overwhelming.
= Well written chapter, my friend.
= Enjoy your vacation. Always wonderful to get away.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers <> Jax / Jackie
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Heidi M
What a fabulous sixteenth birthday trip to give Shana!
A couple suggestions:
Jeff grinned is used twice somewhat close together.
Abraham's genealogy is in Genesis.
I've been to Auschwitz so I understand why her skin crawled when she talked about it. The images are still burned into my brain from my trip forty-four years ago.
Nice job on this section.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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What a fabulous sixteenth birthday trip to give Shana!
A couple suggestions:
Jeff grinned is used twice somewhat close together.
Abraham's genealogy is in Genesis.
I've been to Auschwitz so I understand why her skin crawled when she talked about it. The images are still burned into my brain from my trip forty-four years ago.
Nice job on this section.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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I have corrected those already except Jeff grinning. I will get to that. Thank you. I must have been corrected Genesis as you were reviewing.
Comment from Sankey
Top chapter I love Fiddler on the Roof movie. Begot we call call them the "Begatitudes" hehe also Genesis spelled wrong but maybe the person just said it wrong.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Top chapter I love Fiddler on the Roof movie. Begot we call call them the "Begatitudes" hehe also Genesis spelled wrong but maybe the person just said it wrong.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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I can't believe I spelled it wrong and nobody caught it until you. Thank you. I have corrected it.
Comment from Sasha
You did a great job with this chapter. I loved the video, I forgot how much I enjoyed that movie and the music that went with it. Have a great vacation and don't worry about posting, we will all be here when you get back.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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You did a great job with this chapter. I loved the video, I forgot how much I enjoyed that movie and the music that went with it. Have a great vacation and don't worry about posting, we will all be here when you get back.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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It's one of my favorites. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I liked this chapter and learning about Shana's thoughts and reasoning. It's always hard to look back at how those poor people were mistreated and abused, and to imagine that any human being could inflict such torture on another. But in truth, similar things happen every day across our world of monsters. Have a wonderful vacation! :-)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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I liked this chapter and learning about Shana's thoughts and reasoning. It's always hard to look back at how those poor people were mistreated and abused, and to imagine that any human being could inflict such torture on another. But in truth, similar things happen every day across our world of monsters. Have a wonderful vacation! :-)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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You are correct about the horrors continuing. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written and will give the reader insight into what German concentration camps were really like through Shane's words well done I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Hello my friend this is well written and will give the reader insight into what German concentration camps were really like through Shane's words well done I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
