Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "The Reaper"Dawn of Chaos
23 total reviews
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi TPAC
Very sorry but I have to agree with some of the other reviews. I have read your poem but am totally confused as to your message. I'm very confused.
Take care, Pete
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hi TPAC
Very sorry but I have to agree with some of the other reviews. I have read your poem but am totally confused as to your message. I'm very confused.
Take care, Pete
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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I will consider your personal remark, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed view.
Comment from greyson ernst
lol i love how the people are plants because he has a gardening tool and a deadly weapon really nice poem this should be a short story because what type of poem is this? and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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lol i love how the people are plants because he has a gardening tool and a deadly weapon really nice poem this should be a short story because what type of poem is this? and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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No ideal of type or style, if indeed poetry. Glad certain aspects were appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate.
Comment from Pantygynt
I imagine English is not your first language. This made little sense to me. I don't know if you have access to a competent English speaker, but if you have I suggest you try to enlist his or her aid. As you can see from the grades in several other reviews, I am not alone in my opinion.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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I imagine English is not your first language. This made little sense to me. I don't know if you have access to a competent English speaker, but if you have I suggest you try to enlist his or her aid. As you can see from the grades in several other reviews, I am not alone in my opinion.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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No, from outside the planet, trying to fill in gaps in my life, appreciating your generous rate despite flaws.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a powerful and enjoyable poem. You do a great job with the descriptions in this poem. Very creative and very enjoyable. Love the details. Great job!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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This is a powerful and enjoyable poem. You do a great job with the descriptions in this poem. Very creative and very enjoyable. Love the details. Great job!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Glad some aspects in this write were appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a Halloween poetry contest entry. It really captures the Halloween spirit. Thank you for sharing. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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This should have been a Halloween poetry contest entry. It really captures the Halloween spirit. Thank you for sharing. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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I haven't considered that viewpoint, thanking you for that tap, appreciating your thought and generous given rate.
Comment from lancellot
No, I write is review with no I'll will or intent to insult the author, but this, at least to my eyes, reads like random conglomeration of words, loosely based on a death theme. It is chaos personified. Maybe that was the goal who knows.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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No, I write is review with no I'll will or intent to insult the author, but this, at least to my eyes, reads like random conglomeration of words, loosely based on a death theme. It is chaos personified. Maybe that was the goal who knows.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Not exactly my goal, needing a variety of items to tell a story, thanking you for your generous rate and great shout out.
Comment from January L'Angelle
I'm not quite sure what I'm reading. It wasn't clear to me. There were a lot of violent words on the page and I think you might have considered a violence warning on here... just a thought. -January L.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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I'm not quite sure what I'm reading. It wasn't clear to me. There were a lot of violent words on the page and I think you might have considered a violence warning on here... just a thought. -January L.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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No this particular write needs revisions to bring forth its clarity, thanking you for your generous rate dispute those flaws. I welcome your response.
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
Another great poem with very thoughtful and vivid descriptions. You have a great use of imagery in your writing to present clearly complex ideas. I felt the lines needed breaking up a bit, into shorter lines, but I think that's more personal choice.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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Another great poem with very thoughtful and vivid descriptions. You have a great use of imagery in your writing to present clearly complex ideas. I felt the lines needed breaking up a bit, into shorter lines, but I think that's more personal choice.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2020
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No this particular piece needs revisions to enhance its coherency thanking you for your generous rate dispute its flaw welcoming your response.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This needs some punctuation or for the words to be broken up into more lines. It is very hard to read or to get the meaning of it because of that. If you did that, it would probably be more understandable.
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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This needs some punctuation or for the words to be broken up into more lines. It is very hard to read or to get the meaning of it because of that. If you did that, it would probably be more understandable.
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Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Appreciate the shout structuring is one of my flaws considering your statement thanking you for generous rate and welcomed views
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A pretty grim chapter with a multitude of names a and terms for one conclusion death ain't pretty and the violent one is the worst. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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A pretty grim chapter with a multitude of names a and terms for one conclusion death ain't pretty and the violent one is the worst. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Glad aspects in this read were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed views.
