Comment from Number11

Excellent

Cute! Makes me worry for the little fellow and feel warm at the same time! I think its a good combination of the two, a funny contrast, but it works.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

What an interesting review -thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This sedoka, Paddington Bear, has the proper set up and marks the time that we recognize the passing of the bear's creator, Michael Bond, this week. Sad, but in character. Nice.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks for the review -such an adorable bear ! zanya

Comment from giraffmang

Good

Hi there,

I think the last line of the first verse has 8 silly bulls. (3/3/1/1) You could just omit 'left'.

in the second verse, insert a space in the middle line after the comma for better presentation.

A nice piece, and fitting tribute to Michael Bond and his sad passing away.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading and engaging -much appreciated zanya

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This tells the world for a toys point of view. A loved toy will bear anything to be loved and played with.

Good luck in the contest.

Keep writing.

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks for the review zanya

reply by dragonpoet on 04-Jul-2017

You're welcome.

dp