Haiku( blue, green or white striped)
Ocean Haiku2 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry and haiku for the ocean's contest
with the exact 5-7-5 syllables
and excellent imagery i the colors of the icebergs/sea
A solid satori line to complete the poem
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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This is a fine entry and haiku for the ocean's contest
with the exact 5-7-5 syllables
and excellent imagery i the colors of the icebergs/sea
A solid satori line to complete the poem
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked this it is very well written and I love the way you refer to the icebergs as Antarctica's art they can be beautiful in their own way regards Jill
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Yes I liked this it is very well written and I love the way you refer to the icebergs as Antarctica's art they can be beautiful in their own way regards Jill
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Yes they can -thanks for reading zanya
