Seagull
It's not always what it seems!15 total reviews
Comment from MaggieF
Fantastic, your poem scanned well, the alliteration did not overwhelm the poem, very clever. Great imagery. I had a seagull swoop down and take my Cornish pasty right out of my hand! Well done. MaggieF
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Fantastic, your poem scanned well, the alliteration did not overwhelm the poem, very clever. Great imagery. I had a seagull swoop down and take my Cornish pasty right out of my hand! Well done. MaggieF
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Wow! Thank you so much for such a great review, and for the six precious stars. I am so grateful for both.
Sorry about your pasty....they are blatant thieves!! : )
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello friend I really enjoyed reading this alliteration piece I think that it is beautifully penned and you have a lot of good adjectives and verbs that clearly describe a image in my mind thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Hello friend I really enjoyed reading this alliteration piece I think that it is beautifully penned and you have a lot of good adjectives and verbs that clearly describe a image in my mind thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you for such an encouraging review. Your time and comment are much appreciated : )
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this well penned alliteration about a seagull. You used your 's' words with style and grace. The lines didn't feel forced and flowed along. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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thank you for sharing this well penned alliteration about a seagull. You used your 's' words with style and grace. The lines didn't feel forced and flowed along. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you for your time and kind review : )
Comment from Zinnia48
I'm a great, great fan of alliteration (am unable to write without it). However, you took it to new heights! And each word was appropriate to the content, and increased the visual experience. Thanks! Caroline
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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I'm a great, great fan of alliteration (am unable to write without it). However, you took it to new heights! And each word was appropriate to the content, and increased the visual experience. Thanks! Caroline
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you so very much or your review and the 6 precious stars. They are both much appreciated : )
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-You followed the prompt directions.
-An interesting poem about this
experience the seagull had.
-I doubt if it will eat sausage again!
-I like this line:
"Skimming sapphire, summer skies"
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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-Very nice artwork.
-You followed the prompt directions.
-An interesting poem about this
experience the seagull had.
-I doubt if it will eat sausage again!
-I like this line:
"Skimming sapphire, summer skies"
-Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much for your time and review. Both much appreciated : )
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You are welcome.