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Lotus

ABC poem.

14 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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I didn't realize how a lotus grew. It does seem to be a strong encouragement to fight through your problems to get through to the other side.

Congrats of placing in the contests.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much.
reply by dragonpoet on 24-Jun-2017
    any time.

    dp
Comment from LIJ Red
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The follows the ABC form as it should, and delivers a coherent message. The imagery and artwork compliment the post. Looks excellent to my unschooled eye.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Irish Rain
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Amazingly beautiful, that out of the murky depth, can come these visions in pink and white. Just goes to show, appearances can be deceiving. Great ABC...blessings...

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Nika2016
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I love this and it could refer to a woman's journey, as well...I visited a place similar to the photo near my home...In this place, the forest was quiet...as if in prayer...serenity...no sound but falling water and pool's ripple...beautiful poem..

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much once again for these glittering stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Beautiful flowers rising up and thriving by looking toward the sun and blossoming and blooming, very uplifting words for anyone disheartened, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much for this great review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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this is a lovely ABC poem dealing with the heartiness of the lotus. I loved the way you described the setting and your picture enhanced the words. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written ABC poem. The Lotus is one of the most beautiful flowers that flourish in the murkiest waters thinkable. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very nice and beautifully written ABC poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good wording and great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Excellent ABC entry, Sanku.
You know, each color of the lily has certain meaning. White lily symbolizes purity, daylily coquetry, while the tiger lily symbolizes majesty and wealth.

Known to man for thousands of years, the bulb of the Madonna lily, one of the more popular species of lilies out of hundreds, was once cultivated to make a medicinal ointment and was popular with the Greeks and Romans for both its medicinal properties, as well as its decorative beauty.
The name lily comes from the Greek word 'leiron' which referred to the white Madonna lily that is believed to have grown out of the milk of the goddess Hera.
Lilies are nowadays given as a 30th wedding anniversary flower.
Neither of my two marriages ever made it that far.

Nicely done, best of luck!
~Dean :)

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
    thank you very much for all the info about the lilies .the lotus has a lot of religious and spiritual significance in both in Hinduism and Buddhism.
Comment from zanya
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A metaphorical life lesson of hope and fortitude contained within the words of this ABC poem - such sheer beauty can emerge from the most unlikely sources - lovely pic

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much.