Serenity
Thoughts on a quiet evening44 total reviews
Comment from Mai Mai
This is a very interesting piece. It is quite lovely. The has a great rhythm to it and moves along playfully. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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This is a very interesting piece. It is quite lovely. The has a great rhythm to it and moves along playfully. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you MaiMai for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
After reading this, I find that 'Serenity' is a very good poem.
Beautiful artwork. The image shown supports the poem. The background color selected goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Spiritual Poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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After reading this, I find that 'Serenity' is a very good poem.
Beautiful artwork. The image shown supports the poem. The background color selected goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Spiritual Poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you Nikki for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from tfawcus
Lovely even rhythm in this 8/6 ballad meter that gives an impression of serenity and divine connection to this glorious night-time scene. I also liked the phrasing of your final two lines:
"My pilgrimage will be complete
in Your eternity."
It places just the right emphasis on the word "Your".
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Lovely even rhythm in this 8/6 ballad meter that gives an impression of serenity and divine connection to this glorious night-time scene. I also liked the phrasing of your final two lines:
"My pilgrimage will be complete
in Your eternity."
It places just the right emphasis on the word "Your".
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you Tony for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Caressa_08
This makes a very nice, calm, serene read for me, and yes, our thoughts should be on the peaceful side at night with all the turmoil in the world, and sometimes, in our own personal lives...we still have what your poem reveals, in view and in sound to search for and in turn...help our spirituality.
God Bless & Best Wishes for your entry...Caressa_08
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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This makes a very nice, calm, serene read for me, and yes, our thoughts should be on the peaceful side at night with all the turmoil in the world, and sometimes, in our own personal lives...we still have what your poem reveals, in view and in sound to search for and in turn...help our spirituality.
God Bless & Best Wishes for your entry...Caressa_08
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you Caressa for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from smerryman3
Beautiful poem. Silky smooth and so rich in description! I especially enjoyed "velvet indigo" and "calm serenity." Best of luck in the contest. You should win.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Beautiful poem. Silky smooth and so rich in description! I especially enjoyed "velvet indigo" and "calm serenity." Best of luck in the contest. You should win.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from lyenochka
This reads like a beautiful evening meditation just reflecting on the vastness of the universe and finding "serenity" in the felt presence of God with a peaceful calm about life journey's end.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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This reads like a beautiful evening meditation just reflecting on the vastness of the universe and finding "serenity" in the felt presence of God with a peaceful calm about life journey's end.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very good entry. I like how you relate to nature, yet slip in "Your" to show who created all that beauty for you. Spiritual, but also partly religious. I hope it passed the inpsectors' test. :)
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Very good entry. I like how you relate to nature, yet slip in "Your" to show who created all that beauty for you. Spiritual, but also partly religious. I hope it passed the inpsectors' test. :)
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you Phyllis for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
I made it past the inspectors test but came in 2nd to a lovely poem my MissMerri.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dominador G Robles
The poem is as beautiful as the glow of the shimmering moon. The figures of speech are penetrating and captivating. And then the descriptive imagery in the last stanza: Black night came and then the dawn...The painting was vivid, clear and enveloping...
But then silence...the writer spoke no word!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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The poem is as beautiful as the glow of the shimmering moon. The figures of speech are penetrating and captivating. And then the descriptive imagery in the last stanza: Black night came and then the dawn...The painting was vivid, clear and enveloping...
But then silence...the writer spoke no word!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you Dom for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your poem about spirituality. Your words reflect the soothing feelings we get when we hear His voice and see His presence in the world. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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thank you for sharing your poem about spirituality. Your words reflect the soothing feelings we get when we hear His voice and see His presence in the world. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you patty for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Serenity" is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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"Serenity" is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thank you Dutchess for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
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Janet, you're very welcome.
KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
Best wishes, the Duchess
Janet, you're more than welcome.
Bless you too, the Duchess,
