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Serenity

Thoughts on a quiet evening

44 total reviews 
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

A very nice poem indeed you've crafted here. A fine sense of the bigness and wonderment of the splendour around us in all its spiritual essence.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
    Thank you GMG for your thoughtful and encouraging review.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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This is a lovely poem you wrote on serenity, it sure does sound very serene my friend. I live your picture as well,
Great job! -Kerry

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
    Thank you Kerry for your thoughtful and encouraging review.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 07-Jun-2017
    You are very welcome, Janet
Comment from Curly Girly
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Without a doubt, technically speaking, this is the best poem in the contest, and for that, it will get my vote of confidence. Best wishes, I hope you do well. Off to the voting booth now.
CG
:)

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
    Thank you CG for your thoughtful and encouraging review. Thank you too for your vote. This poem came in 2nd.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from honeytree
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Wonderful art work
to go with the words
of this poem that
share the serenity
at night time from the sky

Honeytree

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
    Thank you Honeytree for your thoughtful and encouraging review.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from MissMerri
Exceptional
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I loved this beautiful poem. It is not only well-composed, but is so beautifully presented and has a strong spiritual message. I actually loved everything about it and think it deserves to win this contest. I can't wait to see who wrote it! ;p Best of luck to you, and six stars too.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Thank you Miss Merri for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and those sparkling six stars.
    Congratulations on the win. I loved your poem too.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from harmony13
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are creative, heart felt and thought provoking. The reader thought about how she always finds God in the
stillness. The artwork is perfect and compliments the words and theme of this
poem.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
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A very soothing poem that flows quite well. Good imagery that also goes well with the picture you chose. Good luck in the contest. Elizabeth.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Thank you Elizabeth for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    I came in 2nd behind a lovely poem by MissMerri.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Pantygynt
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I see this is a "spiritual" poem so presumably the "you" in this God. The poem is voicing the well established idea that God's presence can be found everywhere and anywhere in within his creation. In this case it can be heard in the beautiful sights and sounds of the night. The ballad meter and rhyme works really well. many hymns have been created in this meter and you can sing this to the tune of Little town of Bethlehem if you've a mind.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Thank you for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments. You are right - this could be sung to "Oh Little town of Bethlehem". Cool!

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written spiritual poem. We can only find peace within our souls when we can hear His soothing voice speaking to us through the beauty of nature we experience each day.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Thank you Sandra for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from MaggieF
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Beautiful calming picture. Your poem flowed well with good rhythm and rhyme. I loved 'A full moon rose into the night of velvet indigo' Beautiful. MaggieF

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Thank you Maggie for the wonderful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings
    Janet