Fatal Attraction
A Diamante8 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
I can certainly say one thing about your Diamante contest entry, Anonymous.
It covers both ends of the spectrum where matters of the heart, passion, and love are concerned.
It's oft been said that there is a fine line between love and hate.
That line can be found at the bottom of a divorce decree document.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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I can certainly say one thing about your Diamante contest entry, Anonymous.
It covers both ends of the spectrum where matters of the heart, passion, and love are concerned.
It's oft been said that there is a fine line between love and hate.
That line can be found at the bottom of a divorce decree document.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Lol. Yeah, that is a fine line. But matters of the heart don't seem to recognize lines, until it's too late! Thanks for the review.
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Oh, I dunno.
Battle lines are often drawn, sometimes without either party knowing it.
Have a grrrrrrrrrreat week :)
Comment from kathleenspalding
Well written diamante poem on fire and ice. Excellent choice of words and artwork. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Well written diamante poem on fire and ice. Excellent choice of words and artwork. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thank you very much!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Thal1959
A nicely done Diamante about an existential theme that everyone can relate to. All subjects have two sides, and the Diamante does well to show this - yours especially. (Can double as an antonym poem, too!) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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A nicely done Diamante about an existential theme that everyone can relate to. All subjects have two sides, and the Diamante does well to show this - yours especially. (Can double as an antonym poem, too!) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thank you! And you're right about the Antonym poem.
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written diamante poem. Good description words. To my knowkedge it should only be the third and fifth lines that use the -ing words. I an not sure if it will be acceptable for the contest.
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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A very well-written diamante poem. Good description words. To my knowkedge it should only be the third and fifth lines that use the -ing words. I an not sure if it will be acceptable for the contest.
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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I have revised the poem. Thank you for the reminder!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. This poem is nicely done. The artwork is perfect and captures the subject of your writing in a great manner. It is a good entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Excellent. This poem is nicely done. The artwork is perfect and captures the subject of your writing in a great manner. It is a good entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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I believe you're right! Have revised the poem. Thank you for the reminder and review.
Comment from oliver818
This is great entry for the diamanté competition. I like the wonderfully evocative words you chose, it's very powerful. Thanks for sharing and best of luck with the competition a
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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This is great entry for the diamanté competition. I like the wonderfully evocative words you chose, it's very powerful. Thanks for sharing and best of luck with the competition a
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thanks for the positive feedback!
Comment from dragonpoet
This describes both opposites well. It also shows how they are intertwined and need each other. All the gerands give action and emotion to the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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This describes both opposites well. It also shows how they are intertwined and need each other. All the gerands give action and emotion to the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Thank you for the positive feedback!
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No problem.
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Comment from MaggieF
I've not checked for technicalities, which I'm sure are correct, I enjoyed this, love the shape, funny how shapes can enhance a poem. Good subtle alliteration and great choice of adjectives. MaggieF
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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I've not checked for technicalities, which I'm sure are correct, I enjoyed this, love the shape, funny how shapes can enhance a poem. Good subtle alliteration and great choice of adjectives. MaggieF
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Appreciate your positive insightful review.
