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Recent New Marriage

Patience learned from previous marriage

4 total reviews 
Comment from Tier V. King
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Good morning, Persevere: it is great to get to this point in a new marriage. Some are not that blessed right from the beginning but in time the appreciation for the finer things and special times spent together becoming one. It's funny that you mentioned the snoring accepted. Recently my husband allowed me to hear a tape recording of my snoring. I could not believe my ears. We laughed so hard as we listened because he could never get me to believe that I snore, now that's true love. (lol) Great piece!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2017
    Thank you for your great review, especially your snoring comments. I have often wondered what I sound like.
Comment from BeasPeas
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LOL! Less picky in subsequent marriages, eh? An interesting take on what couples may focus on as deal breakers. A good entry for the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-May-2017


reply by the author on 21-May-2017
    Thank you,Marilyn, for your encouraging review. Having known each other for the last 60 years makes us appreciate what makes a marriage tick.
Comment from tfawcus
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"Old hands united" sounds as though this is a case of second time round. I guess that a few strategies have been learnt to ameliorate the problem! Love conquers all! Who needs sleep anyway?

 Comment Written 20-May-2017


reply by the author on 20-May-2017
    I am glad that my senryu has sent the message that this is indeed the second time around for me and , incidentally, third time for my new husband. We don't have to waste time on getting to know each other; as friends we have already done that. Thank you for taking time to review my senryu.
Comment from sunao
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This senryu is spectacular. I like the image that you used of dragon flies mating. I think that it expressed what it is to be recently married. Thank you so much for writing this. Have a blessed day and good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 20-May-2017


reply by the author on 20-May-2017
    I am overcome by having a piece of writing of mine called spectacular. Thank you for boosting my spirits for the weekend.
reply by sunao on 20-May-2017
    Your welcome!