And They Say I'm Paranoid
15 line poem8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations on your win and this is a great poem about frightening things and I felt the fear oozing from the page and kept looking over my shoulder whilst reading! Love Dolly x
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Congratulations on your win and this is a great poem about frightening things and I felt the fear oozing from the page and kept looking over my shoulder whilst reading! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-May-2017
Comment from JDRBAR
This is eerily great. Paranoia is a horrendous affliction and I sympathize with anyone who suffers from it. Thank you for writing it. And, good luck in the contest.
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This is eerily great. Paranoia is a horrendous affliction and I sympathize with anyone who suffers from it. Thank you for writing it. And, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from kahpot
Excellent poem (not the phobia)this problem must be terrible for those who have it, thinking they are being watched or stalked, never feeling alone a great read with good artwork good luck in your competition****kahpot
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Excellent poem (not the phobia)this problem must be terrible for those who have it, thinking they are being watched or stalked, never feeling alone a great read with good artwork good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Interesting read.
Sounds kind of scary.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem. The background color and red font are a great match for this.
Best of luck to you in the competition.
Thanks for sharing your Phobias.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
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Interesting read.
Sounds kind of scary.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem. The background color and red font are a great match for this.
Best of luck to you in the competition.
Thanks for sharing your Phobias.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from LoannaLois
This is a frightening and haunting poem. Even the colors you used are perfect for atmosphere.
I loved the last line as you were really talking to yourself" I have all night"....
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This is a frightening and haunting poem. Even the colors you used are perfect for atmosphere.
I loved the last line as you were really talking to yourself" I have all night"....
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from lyenochka
Well done in creating suspense through the mind of the poet. It's true that some of the scariest things are things are things that in the mind than in reality.
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Well done in creating suspense through the mind of the poet. It's true that some of the scariest things are things are things that in the mind than in reality.
Comment Written 08-May-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
You're only paranoid if they aren't really out to get you. Your entry for the phobias contest is written very well. This free verse flows along, and takes the reader down a dark path. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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You're only paranoid if they aren't really out to get you. Your entry for the phobias contest is written very well. This free verse flows along, and takes the reader down a dark path. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 05-May-2017
Comment from tfawcus
I like the choppy, rather breathless pace of this that so well shows the terror building in the imagination. The assertions made by the 'victim' are just far-fetched enough to confirm that this is all in the mind.
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I like the choppy, rather breathless pace of this that so well shows the terror building in the imagination. The assertions made by the 'victim' are just far-fetched enough to confirm that this is all in the mind.
Comment Written 05-May-2017
