2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "haiku (Summer clouds)"A collection of Japanese poetry
27 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hola Guapa, como siempre estoy tarde pero el mes de Mayo es un mes con mucho trabajo. Es el mes de las cerezas y tenemos tantos clientes que las quieren. Una buena situacion pero no tan bueno para escribir.
I love your haiku, which paint such a vivid picture of the summer sky. I really want to go back writing haiku. I miss it. I've learned so much from you, and thank you for that. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Hola Guapa, como siempre estoy tarde pero el mes de Mayo es un mes con mucho trabajo. Es el mes de las cerezas y tenemos tantos clientes que las quieren. Una buena situacion pero no tan bueno para escribir.
I love your haiku, which paint such a vivid picture of the summer sky. I really want to go back writing haiku. I miss it. I've learned so much from you, and thank you for that. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 08-May-2017
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Gracias guapa :) I just got done reading your story about addiction. I know you work very hard but your life seems like a lot of fun too. Do you want to adopt me? hahaha
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Yeah, why not! hehe. Thanks so much. xx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend I liked this haiku the middle line is a lovely expression to have enclosed well done again my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 06-May-2017
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Oh yes my friend I liked this haiku the middle line is a lovely expression to have enclosed well done again my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 06-May-2017
reply by the author on 06-May-2017
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Thank you, Jill, I'm grateful for your review.
Gypsy
Comment from lalajovanoski
I found this piece to be nicely written and flows smoothly, great haiku about clouds with a nice picture to accompany it. Thanks for sharing this I enjoyed it!
reply by the author on 06-May-2017
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I found this piece to be nicely written and flows smoothly, great haiku about clouds with a nice picture to accompany it. Thanks for sharing this I enjoyed it!
Comment Written 06-May-2017
reply by the author on 06-May-2017
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Thank you, Lala, I'm grateful for your review.
Gypsy
Comment from smileycloud
good strong Haiku form
nature is well represented
the reference to the slow movement is good imagery
love the pic
love the pic the words paint
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 06-May-2017
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good strong Haiku form
nature is well represented
the reference to the slow movement is good imagery
love the pic
love the pic the words paint
have a smiley day
Comment Written 06-May-2017
reply by the author on 06-May-2017
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Thank you, how are you today? I appreciate that you took the time to read and review this haiku.
Gypsy hugs
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well thank you
hoping you are happy and well too
and you are very welcome and deserving of the review
have a smiley day
Comment from Chrissy710
Yes I can see this working and have a look at your cloud image looks like a fluffy dog or unicorn LOL Nice Haiku .Enjoy the Summer Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 06-May-2017
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Yes I can see this working and have a look at your cloud image looks like a fluffy dog or unicorn LOL Nice Haiku .Enjoy the Summer Cheers Christine
Comment Written 06-May-2017
reply by the author on 06-May-2017
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Thank you, sweetie pie, how are you today? I appreciate that you took the time to read and review this haiku. Cheers
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, Gypsy, watching summer clouds, as slow as they are, is a free pastime. Your poem evokes memories of me cloud cloud watching as a child, but it is a fun thing to do as an adult, too. Your words are well chosen to paint a picture and a leisurely mood.
Thank you for sharing your talent once again.
reply by the author on 06-May-2017
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Yes, Gypsy, watching summer clouds, as slow as they are, is a free pastime. Your poem evokes memories of me cloud cloud watching as a child, but it is a fun thing to do as an adult, too. Your words are well chosen to paint a picture and a leisurely mood.
Thank you for sharing your talent once again.
Comment Written 05-May-2017
reply by the author on 06-May-2017
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Thank you, sweetie pie, how are you today? I appreciate that you took the time to read and review this haiku. How is your writing? and your book project?
Gypsy hugs
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Gypsy, thank you for your concern. I sometimes have a hard time readjusting to work after a vacation in which I could write as much as I want. Vacations change me and I am now throwing my energies into performing stories on stage, exercising, and genealogy. I will likely reduce my postings to once a week. I will likely resume my book project this summer. Thanks again for your concerns.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Oh, what a great poem and picture. It has me lying in a hammock, propped up on pillows sucking lemonade through a straw, watching the cottony clouds as I wait for the sun to reemerge. Great job :-)
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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Oh, what a great poem and picture. It has me lying in a hammock, propped up on pillows sucking lemonade through a straw, watching the cottony clouds as I wait for the sun to reemerge. Great job :-)
Comment Written 05-May-2017
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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thank you for the lovely review
gypsy
Comment from JJInfinity805
In response to your question, I think the last line symbolizes the freedom of simply watching the clouds float slowly across the sky, at no cost and no limitations. Although they may move slow, they move elegantly.
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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In response to your question, I think the last line symbolizes the freedom of simply watching the clouds float slowly across the sky, at no cost and no limitations. Although they may move slow, they move elegantly.
Comment Written 05-May-2017
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend,
Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Years ago when I was young I would lie in the sun and watch many clouds passing that were blocking my sun! I would time them with my watch! Go and make a cup of tea whilst they passed by! I have better things to do with my time now, your poem reminded me of those days, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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Years ago when I was young I would lie in the sun and watch many clouds passing that were blocking my sun! I would time them with my watch! Go and make a cup of tea whilst they passed by! I have better things to do with my time now, your poem reminded me of those days, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-May-2017
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Joan E.
I liked your reminding us to look up and enjoy the patterns in the sky as a "free pastime". I must have a vivid imagination--I could see a bull's head with growing horns! I enjoyed your use of alliteration in this tiny, summer haiku. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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I liked your reminding us to look up and enjoy the patterns in the sky as a "free pastime". I must have a vivid imagination--I could see a bull's head with growing horns! I enjoyed your use of alliteration in this tiny, summer haiku. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 05-May-2017
reply by the author on 05-May-2017
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
