Not I, Said the Fly
Humor in 8 words - 1-6-111 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written funny eight word poem. The best razor always went missing and no one ever knows where it might be. The best is to keep it under lock and key.
reply by the author on 04-May-2017
A very well-written funny eight word poem. The best razor always went missing and no one ever knows where it might be. The best is to keep it under lock and key.
Comment Written 04-May-2017
reply by the author on 04-May-2017
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very true. many thanks.
Comment from Irish Rain
I know couples like this, ha ha. An excellent 8 words poem. Cute, and I know many will relate! Good luck in this contest, blessings....
reply by the author on 04-May-2017
I know couples like this, ha ha. An excellent 8 words poem. Cute, and I know many will relate! Good luck in this contest, blessings....
Comment Written 04-May-2017
reply by the author on 04-May-2017
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thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
you have the right amount of words and the context is comprehensible. The picture is cute and perfect for this poem.
I think the poem is funny. I know what she did with the razor.
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
Hello, my friend,
you have the right amount of words and the context is comprehensible. The picture is cute and perfect for this poem.
I think the poem is funny. I know what she did with the razor.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thanks you very much.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your one-six-one poem for the eight words contest. You have given us a funny statement - especially if you're a woman. They really hate it when you use their razor! Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
thank you for sharing your one-six-one poem for the eight words contest. You have given us a funny statement - especially if you're a woman. They really hate it when you use their razor! Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thanks, Patty!
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I enjoyed this and the picture is just perfect. Some very clever entries coming forth and I have enjoyed reading all of them this is a great one very well done love Meia x
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
I enjoyed this and the picture is just perfect. Some very clever entries coming forth and I have enjoyed reading all of them this is a great one very well done love Meia x
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you very much!!
Comment from kathleenspalding
Hahahaha! It's SO nice to have a sharp blade, LOL! Congratulations for doing a great job on the eight word poem. Excellent choice of artwork and words. Great job!
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
Hahahaha! It's SO nice to have a sharp blade, LOL! Congratulations for doing a great job on the eight word poem. Excellent choice of artwork and words. Great job!
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you so much!!
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You're welcome
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a good one.
I like it.
Nice artwork: The image shown supports the poem.
--I hate to be looking for something that I know I'm not going to find. Things just seem to disappear. My grandmother once said, 'I got to looking for my money, and it said, "find me."
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
This is a good one.
I like it.
Nice artwork: The image shown supports the poem.
--I hate to be looking for something that I know I'm not going to find. Things just seem to disappear. My grandmother once said, 'I got to looking for my money, and it said, "find me."
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thanks. her husband is asking and she's trying to look innocent.
Comment from robyn corum
If that's the husband talking - this does not bode well. *smile* We women must restrain ourselves from borrowing the hubby's razor, no matter how much we want to. *smile* Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
If that's the husband talking - this does not bode well. *smile* We women must restrain ourselves from borrowing the hubby's razor, no matter how much we want to. *smile* Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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husband talking. tried to make that clear with title. could not find a better picture. anyway, thanks.
Comment from kahpot
Yes a common and humorous question asked very often, all over, great picture and words good luch in your competition and thank you for sharing****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
Yes a common and humorous question asked very often, all over, great picture and words good luch in your competition and thank you for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you.
I hope it was clear that the husband was talking. tried to make that clear with the title, but the picture of "Miss Innocence" threw some readers.
Comment from TheWriteTeach
I love this. These few words speak volumes, and cause some good fights, too! No one in their right mind would ever admit to seeing that good, expensive razor. The humor in this is superb.
Nice job with this. Good luck in the contest.
Suzanne
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reply by the author on 03-May-2017
I love this. These few words speak volumes, and cause some good fights, too! No one in their right mind would ever admit to seeing that good, expensive razor. The humor in this is superb.
Nice job with this. Good luck in the contest.
Suzanne
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Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thanks so much for your very nice, encouraging words!