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Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Nightscape"off the chart genuis
8 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Michael,
I love the depth in this one.
Especially love this part.
"considering midnight's bereavement
i'm certain life lives in wind's song
breathing while sunrise flirts with dawn "
Edit:
i'm certain life lives in wind's song // I'm
Beautiful and soft throughout.
I enjoyed this one, my friend.
Thanks for sharing.
m
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Dear Michael,
I love the depth in this one.
Especially love this part.
"considering midnight's bereavement
i'm certain life lives in wind's song
breathing while sunrise flirts with dawn "
Edit:
i'm certain life lives in wind's song // I'm
Beautiful and soft throughout.
I enjoyed this one, my friend.
Thanks for sharing.
m
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hi...-smile-
thank you ...I too thought this good.
appreciate the confirmation. okay I'll capitalize...and attempt a kiss while your close...hey...hey...c'mere...Mo...-headtilt-...what...? love you Michael
Comment from Joan E.
Still trying to catch up and my attention was grabbed by your animated image. I enjoyed your love poem and found "life lives in wind's song" and "sunrise flirts with dawn" memorable. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Still trying to catch up and my attention was grabbed by your animated image. I enjoyed your love poem and found "life lives in wind's song" and "sunrise flirts with dawn" memorable. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hey J...-smile
well thank you i was happy with it too. I kiss on the cheek and hug gently your company. love Michael
Comment from Yalini
What a legendary soul...
Just impressing all..
And all we have to fall....
In love with Ur words...
Thats really admirable...
My taste is mentioned...
In Ur style...great sir
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What a legendary soul...
Just impressing all..
And all we have to fall....
In love with Ur words...
Thats really admirable...
My taste is mentioned...
In Ur style...great sir
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
Comment from Poisonandperfume
This is beautifully written. The language is inviting. I love the line "every sunrise flirts with dawn". "Midnight's bereavement of oxygen" drew me in. I think of lovers past when I read this. I feel the breeze that billows the long linen curtains.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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This is beautifully written. The language is inviting. I love the line "every sunrise flirts with dawn". "Midnight's bereavement of oxygen" drew me in. I think of lovers past when I read this. I feel the breeze that billows the long linen curtains.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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Comment from Mastery
"somewhere billows curtains white linen long
bidding sweet melody come on home
comfortable as southern climate coos welcome"
Brilliant writing, my friend. Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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"somewhere billows curtains white linen long
bidding sweet melody come on home
comfortable as southern climate coos welcome"
Brilliant writing, my friend. Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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Hey Bob...-smile-...much appreciated...thanks man. love Michael
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I forgot, Mike. Which part of Michigan are you from again? Bless you, Bob
Comment from RGstar
VIRTUAL SIX
I wonder if people take the time to really read your work. Some aspects of the phrasing, though not conventional, are as excellent as they are home to you.
I mean...the below is just brilliant in terms of something that belongs to the author, and none can write or express it this way....ever again, for it is unique.
Bravo.
''somewhere billows curtains white linen long
bidding sweet melody come on home
comfortable as southern climate coos welcome''
The first too lines...wow, I would give a good few breaths to have thought of such a beautiful sentence.
The last line capped it all, yet I wondered about the word 'coo' an operation's manager in a company or a word similar to 'croon? I might have a look there, but that stanza blew me away with its beauty.
You must promote this. I have no sixes but wish I so did.
This is good poetry.
Bravo my friend.
RG
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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VIRTUAL SIX
I wonder if people take the time to really read your work. Some aspects of the phrasing, though not conventional, are as excellent as they are home to you.
I mean...the below is just brilliant in terms of something that belongs to the author, and none can write or express it this way....ever again, for it is unique.
Bravo.
''somewhere billows curtains white linen long
bidding sweet melody come on home
comfortable as southern climate coos welcome''
The first too lines...wow, I would give a good few breaths to have thought of such a beautiful sentence.
The last line capped it all, yet I wondered about the word 'coo' an operation's manager in a company or a word similar to 'croon? I might have a look there, but that stanza blew me away with its beauty.
You must promote this. I have no sixes but wish I so did.
This is good poetry.
Bravo my friend.
RG
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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ha...wow....if this doesnt make taller i want money back....-smile-....thank you Brother. I know who you are and if you see me I'm content. thank you for promoting this....just running short right now. always love Michael
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A couple of beautiful lines in this one, Michael. We sometimes catch them and only realize after...me included.
Best wishes.
Comment from moonsunrise
I love the tenderness and depth of your poem. The visual along with the song is so beautifully descriptive. I always loved this song By K.K.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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I love the tenderness and depth of your poem. The visual along with the song is so beautifully descriptive. I always loved this song By K.K.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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well hey...-smile- I thank you kindly, glad you enjoyed it. love Michael
Comment from kahpot
Very well done the read and poem are excellent flows well with great artwork to accompany your write thank you for sharing and for the notes ( video) ****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Very well done the read and poem are excellent flows well with great artwork to accompany your write thank you for sharing and for the notes ( video) ****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Hi...-smile-...appreciate the input Kapot.
yea i love that song. thanks again. love Michael
