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Comment from Joan E.
Well, I fell behind again and then FanStory didn't help by being off-line all day. Fortunately, I caught your post and art selections. I admired your love song and once again found the circularity effective. Sweet dreams- Joan
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Well, I fell behind again and then FanStory didn't help by being off-line all day. Fortunately, I caught your post and art selections. I admired your love song and once again found the circularity effective. Sweet dreams- Joan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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ah dont worry about it I'm so far behind I can see my own butt...the years do take there toll...but...what...? love Michael
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Thanks for commiserating and for the extra hugs and kisses! More back at ya- Joan
Comment from RGstar
Love, poetry and song, hold well together, my brother. As words delve into the mind, out pours the emotion of which we would seek to express, and so we do this individually. When you formulate, your style is your own which I have come to both appreciate and warm to.
I can live the emotions.
Once again you deliver.
Stunning artwork, stunning delivery.
Bravo, Michael.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Love, poetry and song, hold well together, my brother. As words delve into the mind, out pours the emotion of which we would seek to express, and so we do this individually. When you formulate, your style is your own which I have come to both appreciate and warm to.
I can live the emotions.
Once again you deliver.
Stunning artwork, stunning delivery.
Bravo, Michael.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Hey Bro...-smile-
yes thats it isnt it...if you cant feel it no one can.
a life's poetry should move you to follow...lead in the dance. Appreciate your life and its poetry. love Michael
Comment from MissMerri
There are so many things that make this poem beautiful, Michael. I love the liberal distribution of assonance throughout, and the light sprinkling of rhyme, alliteration and other poetic devices also adds a delicate touch, but in the end, it is the emotional impact your words have that make your poetry something to return to over and over. I love the story, thinly veiled, of a loved one so cherished and adored, a "treasured beauty known by far and wide, worth more than earth owns... " and the "resplendent heart warmth consistent in might, outshines the brightest star's birth." What an honor it would be to be described like this! Someone you hold dear is very fortunate indeed! But I gather from the first and last stanzas, this is not a one-way love. It is clear the love is reciprocated, and that makes me happy. Thank you for taking time to share some of your shining works with us. I loved this beautiful poem and all that it implied, but mostly I love the emotional stir it brings my heart.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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There are so many things that make this poem beautiful, Michael. I love the liberal distribution of assonance throughout, and the light sprinkling of rhyme, alliteration and other poetic devices also adds a delicate touch, but in the end, it is the emotional impact your words have that make your poetry something to return to over and over. I love the story, thinly veiled, of a loved one so cherished and adored, a "treasured beauty known by far and wide, worth more than earth owns... " and the "resplendent heart warmth consistent in might, outshines the brightest star's birth." What an honor it would be to be described like this! Someone you hold dear is very fortunate indeed! But I gather from the first and last stanzas, this is not a one-way love. It is clear the love is reciprocated, and that makes me happy. Thank you for taking time to share some of your shining works with us. I loved this beautiful poem and all that it implied, but mostly I love the emotional stir it brings my heart.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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yes I agree...there is something innately attractive to being completely comfortable with another human being...even if she is an angel. luck a the draw I guess...some say my heads always in heaven. you gonna let me out a here...or do I need to start eaten locust and honey....-smile-...love you much. Michael
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Interestingly, I've been told since very young, my head was in the clouds. Wish I knew how to make it up to the heaven level. I think I might like to converse with angels also. ;p
I wish you could find the time to write more often. I enjoy your poetry so much. MM
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yea she's a trip...smile-
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Michael, this is truly a step up in the poetry realm of your work. It has such keen imagery, for me its also easy to dive into, to understand its fluid lines, its emotions as the capture me line by line.
I thought you did an exceptional job on this one, my friend.
Really well done throughout. One of your best.
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs
m
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Dear Michael, this is truly a step up in the poetry realm of your work. It has such keen imagery, for me its also easy to dive into, to understand its fluid lines, its emotions as the capture me line by line.
I thought you did an exceptional job on this one, my friend.
Really well done throughout. One of your best.
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs
m
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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O Mojo Ive been chasing after the giants dream since we can remember...steppin' up has become my forte...as well you know. why dont you just surrender and knight me Mike before something else bad happens. Anyway...think about I got a fire breathing dragon desire to win soon. youre call...area code 281-Hey-your dream came true...-smile-...love you much Michael
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Like classic art and painting and classic epic and literature, as truth and beauty ever sung dimensionally or metaphorically, here the poet tells something about life and beauty is ever sung by the masters long, songs still hum before us, we are to appreciate and use; I liked and enjoyed the read, philosophical appreciation of living.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Like classic art and painting and classic epic and literature, as truth and beauty ever sung dimensionally or metaphorically, here the poet tells something about life and beauty is ever sung by the masters long, songs still hum before us, we are to appreciate and use; I liked and enjoyed the read, philosophical appreciation of living.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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you better believe it...-smile-
hey thank you Chief....love Michael
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Mozart's Hum' is an excellent read.
The wording is STRONG.
Nice video.
Beautiful artwork: The image shown supports the poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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'Mozart's Hum' is an excellent read.
The wording is STRONG.
Nice video.
Beautiful artwork: The image shown supports the poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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hi...-smile-...
ah well I'm sure glad you enjoyed it...my writing is more or less dependent upon my mood or phone more accurately...so we sure hope somebody calls soon. love Michael
