Hai....KU!..Pardon me
For Gypsy and Dean21 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Dip, This is just too funny. I enjoy doing the three line poems as well as the haiku when I think of it. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this great fun poem about our friends Dean and Gypsy Rose! Great job. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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Dip, This is just too funny. I enjoy doing the three line poems as well as the haiku when I think of it. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this great fun poem about our friends Dean and Gypsy Rose! Great job. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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Glad you could see the fun in it Gypsy and dean found it funny also. which is a good thing.
dip
Comment from TAB_that's me
I know you have reviewed some of my haiku before and you always say you don't like to review short forms:)
You wrote a wonderful and fun poem about it. You poke fun at the form but also compliment Dean and Gypsy.
I challenge you to write a haiku now!
I'm giving you a six as it made me smile.
teresa
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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I know you have reviewed some of my haiku before and you always say you don't like to review short forms:)
You wrote a wonderful and fun poem about it. You poke fun at the form but also compliment Dean and Gypsy.
I challenge you to write a haiku now!
I'm giving you a six as it made me smile.
teresa
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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No I am not a great fan of haiku yet the more I read and understand its simple, yet complicated form, I am beginning to come around
Thanks Teresa much appreciated as always
dip
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me laugh Dip! I'm not a big fan of Haiku, but I have written a few, I love yours! You certainly, dug yourself a hole here! He he he, This poem flowed so well with great rhymes, good job! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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You made me laugh Dip! I'm not a big fan of Haiku, but I have written a few, I love yours! You certainly, dug yourself a hole here! He he he, This poem flowed so well with great rhymes, good job! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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As long as you could see the funny side of it Dolly
dip
Comment from Gloria ....
Yep, you nailed a few of the fun aspects of haiku--ie how to write a review that must be longer than the actual poem.
It was terrific of Gypsy to teach Japanese forms as we were more or less lost with the passing of Alvin.
Lots of fun and I'm sure most appreciated by both Dean and Gypsy.
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Yep, you nailed a few of the fun aspects of haiku--ie how to write a review that must be longer than the actual poem.
It was terrific of Gypsy to teach Japanese forms as we were more or less lost with the passing of Alvin.
Lots of fun and I'm sure most appreciated by both Dean and Gypsy.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thankyou Gloria. Wasn't sure how Gypsy and Dean would take this fun little dig written completely tongue in cheek.
But they were both cool about it as reflected in their reviews
Phew!
dip
Comment from l.raven
OMG Waves, I love Gypsy and Dean...this is to funny...I have read some of the most beautiful Haiku poems on here sense she started teaching...it's not easy to tell a entire story in so few words...she is the Haiku Queen...you did a great job on this you goof...LOL...love your poem...and the picture of Gypsy is beautiful...very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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OMG Waves, I love Gypsy and Dean...this is to funny...I have read some of the most beautiful Haiku poems on here sense she started teaching...it's not easy to tell a entire story in so few words...she is the Haiku Queen...you did a great job on this you goof...LOL...love your poem...and the picture of Gypsy is beautiful...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thankyou linda as long as it is taken in the satirical spirit it was supposed to be lol
thanks for the great review as always.
dip
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I know you mean no harm...your so welcome...xxoo love...good night...sweet dreams
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...love your little haiku at the end Mr. Dip!!! A lovely tribute for Miss Gypsy and Mr. Dean, celebrating their skill at charming haiku's....they are often beyond me!!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Ha ha...love your little haiku at the end Mr. Dip!!! A lovely tribute for Miss Gypsy and Mr. Dean, celebrating their skill at charming haiku's....they are often beyond me!!! Blessings...
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thankyou so much Irish much appreciated. ME TOO! lol
dip
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Dr Dip,
HAHAHA ... good attempt... your contemporary haiku doesn't have a kigo and it's a statement but my rhyming poem wasn't perfect either so we are even.
There are a lot of things you can mention when you review haiku. For example: how many syllables? are the first and second line connected grammatically? Does it have a kigo (season) word? how is the presentation? how does it make you feel? any memories? was it surprising? insightful?
I have the same problem with rhymed poems. After checking the rhyme scheme and meter I am out of words.
To each their own, my friend.
We are even. LoL
Gypsy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Hello, Dr Dip,
HAHAHA ... good attempt... your contemporary haiku doesn't have a kigo and it's a statement but my rhyming poem wasn't perfect either so we are even.
There are a lot of things you can mention when you review haiku. For example: how many syllables? are the first and second line connected grammatically? Does it have a kigo (season) word? how is the presentation? how does it make you feel? any memories? was it surprising? insightful?
I have the same problem with rhymed poems. After checking the rhyme scheme and meter I am out of words.
To each their own, my friend.
We are even. LoL
Gypsy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Shit i forgot the kigo!! what was i thinking? lol
glad you could see the funny side gypsy it was obviously written tongue in cheek. Good to see you have a sense of humour
with the greatest respect
dip
Comment from Brett Matthew West
According to FanStory, Dean has been recognized as the very best Writer on this site for the last two years.
Rose and her haikus lead the way in that genre.
Nothing wrong with occasionally poking fun at Dean.
I tell him things to his PM page all the time.
Keep it up. Good for them!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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According to FanStory, Dean has been recognized as the very best Writer on this site for the last two years.
Rose and her haikus lead the way in that genre.
Nothing wrong with occasionally poking fun at Dean.
I tell him things to his PM page all the time.
Keep it up. Good for them!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thankyou Brett much appreciated. It's all in a bit of fun I have the greatest respect for Gypsy and Dean.
dip
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hey Dip; Gypsy gave us a hint about reviewing the haiku format a while back. She said to comment on the presentation, the words, and how they made you feel. It works to fill up the required 150 characters AND beyond. Your little ode to the haiku was pleasant to read and the humor showed.
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Hey Dip; Gypsy gave us a hint about reviewing the haiku format a while back. She said to comment on the presentation, the words, and how they made you feel. It works to fill up the required 150 characters AND beyond. Your little ode to the haiku was pleasant to read and the humor showed.
~patty~
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Yeah I know lol Theres no other poetry discipline on here where you are given a guide on how to review it lol
All in fun Patty
much respect to Gypsy and dean its just they love spruiking and promoting the haiku club lol
dip
Comment from Pantygynt
You don't need to worry about Gypsy and Dean
but some of the acolytes can be quite mean
especially if you take the p**s
And then it all came down to this
Like what I once did I thought it suited
They didn't agree and had me muted.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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You don't need to worry about Gypsy and Dean
but some of the acolytes can be quite mean
especially if you take the p**s
And then it all came down to this
Like what I once did I thought it suited
They didn't agree and had me muted.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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hehe you are a rhyming poet
and you didn't know it!
thanks again Panty much appreciated.
dip
