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Mounting Joys Whispers

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Comment from l.raven
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HI Ronni, this is just beautifully written...and oh how Spring bring out the love and romance of all things living...even the birds and the bees...LOL...it's beautiful...I love your poem sweet lady...and your picture and colors...stunning...so nicely written...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
    Thank you dear Linda, happy you enjoyed and appreciated. Hope you have a fabulous Spring...with tons of
    smiles joys and sweet dreams.... Love ya always, Ronni
reply by l.raven on 29-Apr-2017
    you are so welcome Ronni...and you have a fabulous Spring as well...and sweet dream too...God Bless ...love Linda xxoo
Comment from crzypnter
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Dearest Ronnie,

It is always a pleasure to read your uplifting and thought provoking poem's. Spring time is a time of renewal and growth as vanable plants soak up the sun's rays, grow and reach for more. This is a wonderful comparison to our own spiritual growth. As our vanable spirit soaks up the word of God and we grow. The more we take in the stronger our spirit becomes.
Thanks for sharing. Sorry I am so far behind. Take care my friend. God bless

August

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
    Thank you August, for your thoughtful comments and compliments, happy you enjoyed. Your reflections
    are right on, and I hope you are having a beautiful spring time...and just enjoy!
    Blessings and best wishes, Ronni And thanks too dear friend. FOR THE EXTRA STAR!
Comment from RGstar
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Virtual Six

Dear Ronni.
So sorry for missing this, its beautiful.
I had been working non stop to get the poem out by deadline ( sonnet)
This should have been supported early for its beauty and well woven words.
Yes many alliteration, but not overdone...on the contrary, excels in the projection of the imagery you give.
Bravo.
Such beauty interwoven.
I hope this gets into poem of the month.
Super.
My best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
    Thank you RG,
    For your appreciative comments and compliments. Pleased you enjoyed and related to its theme
    and message. Hope you got your Sonnet done in time.....take care...and don't forget to check
    your Horoscope or consult with a good Astrologer.....Your STAR is awaiting fulfillment by you!
    Best wishes always, Ronni
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem. There are many things in our lives that we can find joy in. When we just get to stand still for a few minutes we will see the beauty all around us.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
    Thank you for your perceptive comments on this poem, Happy you appreciated it, relating so perfectly to
    theme and message. Have a gorgeous Spring wherever you are....with lots of smiles, joys and sweet dreams.
    Blessings always, Ronni
Comment from Janet Foor
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I enjoyed the personification of Spring and the beautiful alliteration throughout this delightful poem.
A glorious picture to enhance your well written piece.

Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
    Thank you for your kind thoughts and comments on this poem. That you enjoyed it, is the added reward
    and pleasure. Hope you have a marvelous Spring...abiding loves, and beauty's blessings of the season
    to enchant and delight evermore.
    Blessings and best wishes, Ronni
Comment from Irish Rain
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How beautiful Miss Ronni! From one magical spring to the next, your words are wondrous. I especially felt this in the line...'our touch warmer, dearer, ecstatic'...this line seems to lead deeper into spring, and the relationship. A lovely celebration here!!! Blessings...

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Thank you dear friend! So elated you enjoyed and shared your perceptive thoughts and comments so graciously!
    Indeed, a dual celebration, as you keenly noted in poem's essence!
    Hope you have a fantastic Spring time..in your loves and beauties and blessings of season's gifts to all!
    Blessings and best wishes, Ronni
reply by Irish Rain on 22-Apr-2017
    So lovely Miss Ronni...thank you!! Have a nice Sunday!!
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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Each day of our growing love
we peek at a newly found wonder
our touch warmer, dearer, ecstatic
than ever felt or reached before
mounting myriad of mysteries
nudge us to jubilantly yet explore
the heights of that coveted love's peak
breathless, blissed, beguiled
in sensual, surreal, sublime infinity
until....the next enticing, evolving,
elatedly captivating....Spring! ,such beauty in this ronni, bravo love meia x


 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Thank you dear Meia,
    for highlighting your favorite message within this poem. So happy you enjoyed and
    shared it with your lovely visit! May your Spring time....and loves, be spectacular with
    beauties and blessings of the season and Spring Romances it entices!
    Best wises, Ronni
Comment from Joan E.
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I relished the abundant echoing sounds in your romantic poem with its personification and adoration of Spring. "Love's peak" is a wonderful, double entendre and metaphor. Brava! -Joan

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Hello Sweet Sunshine!
    Your intrigued 'relishment' whisked up my joys balloon up, up and away, and haven't seen it come back down
    yet...LOL... thanks for the enjoyment high!
    Hope you are enjoying a fabulous Spring, with gorgeous sunshine, and enchanting smiles...
    Love, hugs galore, Ronni
reply by Joan E. on 23-Apr-2017
    Keep flying high! More hugs- Joan
Comment from dragonpoet
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You use alliteration and personification to make this poem move as the grass moves in a spring breeze; Of the music of the violin blows in with wind. This shows the budding of Spring and of love.

I think the orange is more of a fall color than a Spring one. Maybe green or yellow background for grass or sun or red background for roses or love.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Hi there,
    I appreciated your keen notice and suggestion on color changes for this poem, and you were right, and they
    have been made! So pleased you enjoyed it, and you aced its theme and message ever so perfectly!
    And thanks too for your kind encouragement, will do indeed.
    Again thanks for the tip, and most welcomed suggestion.
    Best wishes always, Ronni
reply by dragonpoet on 22-Apr-2017
    You're welcome. I always try my best to help and encourage.

    Joan
Comment from Quantum Traveler
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An Outstanding Writing Combining the Wonderment of Nature while Captivating also the Romantic and Sensual Nature of Heart and Soul.

An Impressive Writing Merged with the Beauty of a Musical Image that Melts and Flows throughout the Poetic Motion of Verse.

Excellent and Outstanding Ronni...Quantum Traveler...Phil.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Hello Phil,
    Thank you for such grand and glorious reflections and comments on this poem! You keyed in on the theme, tone
    and dual celebrative joys ever so perfectly; with my sincerest appreciations happily aglow! Your generous
    compliments, with EXTRA STAR, sincerely appreciated. I happiest of all you enjoyed it so! Moat constructive
    and encouraging review, gratefully noted, and thank you for your time and sharing!
    Gratefully always, Ronni
reply by Quantum Traveler on 23-Apr-2017
    A Masterful and Beautiful Writing.
    Thank you Ronni...Q.T...Phil.