Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I like the way Tanka poems just sort of smack the reader in the face. Especially, when the poem puts us in such a vivid place with a harvest moon and ebony eyes, building the crescendo and anticipation of the bite. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

Thank you :) my friend, you are very kind. :)

gypsy

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Lovely. Very sexy in a creepy kind of way. Is he a vampire?
The picture is also great.
Thanks for sharing your beautiful tanka.

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

what do you think? hee hee i think he is. Thank you :) my friend, you are very kind. :)

gypsy

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Sounds like vampires :P This is a really neat poem. I like the way you put your words together. It flows like water and left me wanting more--I wanted to know if he was a vampire :P

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

Thank you :) my friend, you are very kind. :) hehehe everyone wants to know yeah, he was a vampire


gypsy

reply by Rasmine on 15-May-2017

HeHe, good idea! :)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

That's a VERY COOL picture you've got there accompanying your seductively well written tanka, Gypsy.
She looks like the kinda girl I might go for, if I were about twenty years younger, heh-heh.
I'll say this for her.
She most certainly has great taste in fashion.
Beautifully done...

 Comment Written 14-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

Thank you :) my friend, you are very kind. :)

gypsy

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

I might nibble on her myself. A great example of Tanka. I notice a trend. You're writing more Tanka now. It's excellent. You really have a way with words.

 Comment Written 13-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

Thank you :) my friend, you are very kind. :)

gypsy

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

You've penned a good poem.
It consists of five lines that contain a syllable count: 2-3-7-5-2
Total syllable count: 19
Great artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color chosen goes well with the art and the color of font.
Thanks for sharing your Tanka.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 13-May-2017

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reply by the author on 15-May-2017

Thank you :) my friend, you are very kind. :)

gypsy

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Vampire love? Hmmm I don't know how to review this one gypsy. Ok Great photo
He's about to bite her neck in the light of a harvest moon, Have I made 2 lines yet ?
YES!
Just kidding, nice write

dip

 Comment Written 13-May-2017

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reply by the author on 13-May-2017

Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you read my poem and your kind words.
Gypsy