sunrise rays light up
Sunshine or Moonlight 5/7/54 total reviews
Comment from JDRBAR
The rhythm and imagery is all there. I enjoyed this and wish you luck in the contest. These poems are difficult to judge, even more so to write. God bless.
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The rhythm and imagery is all there. I enjoyed this and wish you luck in the contest. These poems are difficult to judge, even more so to write. God bless.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
Comment from Selina Stambi
Love the final line with the alliteration. It has a certain 'panache' to it.
Terrestrial trek ... just wondering about 'terrestrial' ... I guess it could have three OR four syllables, depending on where the emphasis is placed when pronounced .
Best wishes for the contest,
Sonali
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Love the final line with the alliteration. It has a certain 'panache' to it.
Terrestrial trek ... just wondering about 'terrestrial' ... I guess it could have three OR four syllables, depending on where the emphasis is placed when pronounced .
Best wishes for the contest,
Sonali
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I like this you have done well for this prompt being creative and it is presented beautifully good luck my friend regards Jill
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Yes I like this you have done well for this prompt being creative and it is presented beautifully good luck my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your 5-7-5 about sunlight for the contest. Within your three lines, you have managed to portray a picture of man's constant journey. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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thank you for sharing your 5-7-5 about sunlight for the contest. Within your three lines, you have managed to portray a picture of man's constant journey. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
