Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written short poem you have penned. I am thinking this might be about the Hulk? I can see this as being a reaction from him. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Thanks, Teri. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

I shudder to think of where that car may have wound up, probably mangled all to hell. "It not good to piss of Hulk!" It may be great to have that kind of power, but in my hands, a lot of stuff would be broken beyond recognition.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Thanks, nomi. Bill

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, I had to look at this for a bit and then it clicked. Pure language thing. At first I thought, what's hulk? And the I got it. Great!! Remember English is not my first language. Yeah, it took me a while. How boring is that? Love it. You have a wonderful thing with words. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Thanks, Ulla.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Hulk smashed car. Hulk angry. You wouldn't like Hulk when he is angry. What? You don't like him anyway? Haha this is another cracker from you Bill. That car would be dust by the time Hulk calmed down lol well done kind regards Meia x

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Thank you, Meia. Bill

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Since the background is green, I'm envisioning 'the Hulk' picking up the car and slamming it into the trees! A great opening using the 5-7-5 format. Thank you for sharing this 'finish the rest' post.
~patty~

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017

Thank you, Patty. Bill