Eiffel Tower
Famous Landmark poem4 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Love your lighthearted poem of one of everyone's favorites--the Eiffel Tower written in rhyming couplets. The poem form is perfect for the playfulness of topic and the landmark. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
Love your lighthearted poem of one of everyone's favorites--the Eiffel Tower written in rhyming couplets. The poem form is perfect for the playfulness of topic and the landmark. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Great review -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from kahpot
Amazing the description you gave this icon, a woman dressed in splendor an actress with whom you want a picture with, sometimes the picture explains the words, not this time your words explain and enhance this beautiful picture****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
Amazing the description you gave this icon, a woman dressed in splendor an actress with whom you want a picture with, sometimes the picture explains the words, not this time your words explain and enhance this beautiful picture****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Delighted with this review zanya
Comment from lyenochka
That is a landmark well-known all around the world. I like the use of French like "chic, gauloise, finesse." The tower is "la tour" so the noun is feminine so the use of of "gauloise" is right but then Parisien should also be feminine - Parisienne. Also, there is an extra space in "wrought- iron."
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
That is a landmark well-known all around the world. I like the use of French like "chic, gauloise, finesse." The tower is "la tour" so the noun is feminine so the use of of "gauloise" is right but then Parisien should also be feminine - Parisienne. Also, there is an extra space in "wrought- iron."
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading & comments much appreciated zanya
Comment from kiwisteveh
And no one can comprehend why the tower was so bitterly opposed when it was first being built!
The little touches of French add some flair to your simple rhyming couplets as you paint this lovely tribute of an outstanding landmark.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
And no one can comprehend why the tower was so bitterly opposed when it was first being built!
The little touches of French add some flair to your simple rhyming couplets as you paint this lovely tribute of an outstanding landmark.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya