Let's be Lovers
A Naani2 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Let's Be Lovers, uses twenty-five syllables and four lines to create an offbeat situation between maybe half-siblings, currently in each other's face and looking to be buddies (with benefits?).
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This naani, Let's Be Lovers, uses twenty-five syllables and four lines to create an offbeat situation between maybe half-siblings, currently in each other's face and looking to be buddies (with benefits?).
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Hello Bill, I thank you for your time and appreciate the kind review my friend.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Great title.- It draws the reader in.
Outstanding artwork.- Two thumbs up!
I especially like how the image shows two people (a man and a woman) forming a heart.
Also, like the last line in reference to the Bible.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Great title.- It draws the reader in.
Outstanding artwork.- Two thumbs up!
I especially like how the image shows two people (a man and a woman) forming a heart.
Also, like the last line in reference to the Bible.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Hello Nikki, very kind of you to visit and bless this write; glad you like the verse and the artwork, thank you very much.
