Naani Words matter
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Comment from marybell1
An interesting Naani Poem "Naani Words Matter". You kept to the rules of line and syllable count. A very appropriate photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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An interesting Naani Poem "Naani Words Matter". You kept to the rules of line and syllable count. A very appropriate photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reviewing.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Dean Kuch
OH, I really like the tone of this naani contest entry, especially given the current state of our world today.
Very well composed and impactful.
You got my vote!
Good luck to you...
~Dean
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
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OH, I really like the tone of this naani contest entry, especially given the current state of our world today.
Very well composed and impactful.
You got my vote!
Good luck to you...
~Dean
Comment Written 03-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the great review and support.
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from Mame
This is one where the picture and words are 'married' so perfectly. 'Uncensored Rhetoric' - the phase itself rings with impact and demonstrates the awful power of words from dangerous men ( I can't think of any women resembling Hitler). Yes- old men have made wars and young men die in them - so well said by 'the blood of innocents'. Superb simile 'written' in the blood - outstanding work has left me so moved.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This is one where the picture and words are 'married' so perfectly. 'Uncensored Rhetoric' - the phase itself rings with impact and demonstrates the awful power of words from dangerous men ( I can't think of any women resembling Hitler). Yes- old men have made wars and young men die in them - so well said by 'the blood of innocents'. Superb simile 'written' in the blood - outstanding work has left me so moved.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the bonus star.
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Words Matter, uses twenty-four syllables to, in my opinion, color the Trump administrations inability to keep inflammatory rhetoric from being blurted out by the worst president since W.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This naani, Words Matter, uses twenty-four syllables to, in my opinion, color the Trump administrations inability to keep inflammatory rhetoric from being blurted out by the worst president since W.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reviewing. He does come to mind.
Comment from tfawcus
One can hardly avoid connecting this with the new President, whose off-the-cuff remarks often cause offence on the international stage. "Uncensored rhetoric" describes them well. When one's main focus is on making a country great, this often comes at expense to others.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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One can hardly avoid connecting this with the new President, whose off-the-cuff remarks often cause offence on the international stage. "Uncensored rhetoric" describes them well. When one's main focus is on making a country great, this often comes at expense to others.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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He does come to mind. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from jusylee72
Sadly we have forgotten that war is not glorious and kills but doesn't solve anything. We are still searching for the world that is not full of hate. The military needs to protect us but not encourage war.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Sadly we have forgotten that war is not glorious and kills but doesn't solve anything. We are still searching for the world that is not full of hate. The military needs to protect us but not encourage war.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a good Naani poem.
Great artwork.
Love how the eyes are blind folded.-It shows symbolism.
Good title.- Thumbs up!
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This is a good Naani poem.
Great artwork.
Love how the eyes are blind folded.-It shows symbolism.
Good title.- Thumbs up!
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine naani for the contest
with the correct syllables to the form
"It's always the old lead us to the war
always the young who fall" Phil Ochs song lyric
Unfortunately, today it's uncontrolled twitter
Excellent poem and art work
Well done, well said
Best wishes in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This is a fine naani for the contest
with the correct syllables to the form
"It's always the old lead us to the war
always the young who fall" Phil Ochs song lyric
Unfortunately, today it's uncontrolled twitter
Excellent poem and art work
Well done, well said
Best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good contest entry. I have never heard of Naani poetry before, but there are so many styles of poetry it's hard to keep up.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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A very good contest entry. I have never heard of Naani poetry before, but there are so many styles of poetry it's hard to keep up.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reviewing.
